| "The 500 Year Engagement" Reviews/Comments [ 222 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2009 09:55 EST
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6?! Holy cow! LOL I'm sooo looking forward to seeing how the weddign turns out *smirks* dead idiots and happy blood thirsty inu relatives. gotta love it! I'm giggling so far. Keep up the great work! DD
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 22:06 EST
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hmm, i wonder how many of kagome's decendants will be at the wedding
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 21:56 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not surprised that Kumiko is related to Kagome and Inuyasha, how else would they get the info on the bad guys? I am glad neither girl ended up Kano's lunch. He would have gotten a huge surprise if he had bitten into Kagome though. I giggled my way through Kagome landing on Jaken, and it was good to see him actually liking another human besides Rin. Facing Sesshomaru was hilarious, I could just see the sweat drop over Kagome's head when discussing the pregnancy. I am curious as to what he is going to tell Inuyasha though to get back at Kagome. You have a great balance of humor and plot line that neither gets overwhelmed by the other. I love this story. I can't wait to see the face off between Inuyasha and Kano though. He is really going to regret going after the jewel and Kagome (not necessarily in that order). Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2009 13:22 EST
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the quality has not fallen off, but playing ping pong this chapter between the scenes was a little distracting. even so, it was well done and tastefully written. Keep writing. DD
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 09:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your quality is not faulting at all. This chapter was so funny I have coworkers looking at me funny. Please keep it up. Just one question how many girls in this class will not be pregnat at the end of the year lol.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe(nsi) On: January 26, 2009 13:19 EST
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Maybe I missed something, but when Rin called in Kagome's daughter to go to the dance with Hojo, she was pretending to be Kagome, but now she is going to school with Kagome and Rin. Was that ever explained?
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 20:11 EST
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i understand don't worry about it:) you're doing great! keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 23:36 EST
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hmm, i wonder how many kids rin is going to have and i love meeting another one of kagome's decendents
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 08:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. . I've re-read this story several times I love it so much. I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter as always...lol
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Reviewed By: adalily [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 02:09 EST
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i love this story so much! i cant wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 01:38 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. It is amazing what 500 years of producing family members in one way or another will get you. I am surprised that Inuyasha wasn't more upset about his daughter walking in on him when he was naked and busy then anything else, but I suppose after that length of time with Kagome he lost his inhibitions and shyness. It seemed as if it wasn't the first time they were interrupted at an inopportune moment so I am surprised that they haven't learned to lock the bedroom door. It should be interesting to hear Sesshomaru's reaction to having a "litter" of pups with Kagome's contrivance. If Sango finds out will she accuse Kagome of "helping" her get pregnant? I look forward to seeing what happens next whenever you can get to it.
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Reviewed By: kathy1meme On: January 09, 2009 20:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I have to give you lots of credit for actually putting words to paper (or the electronic equivalent). I have story ideas, but HATE writing/typing. The story's quite entertaining, and since there's no new Inuyasha anymore, this is the next best thing. I hope your friend's problems work themselves out, for both your sakes and to make writing easier. thanks kathy
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 20:12 EST
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I'm glad u remembered this story:) i loved it! keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 17:18 EST
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thank you for the day after christmas update i loved it. i cant wait to find out what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: December 27, 2008 10:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Welcome back! So glad to see you update again! Anyway, the sashimi jokes are hilarious. Can't wait to see what'll happen next. And if you still have idea for that Halloween story you mentioned last chapterf lying around I would love to read it still cuz your stories are always such a treat.
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