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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 02:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for not making me sit on those sharp pointy things too long, they interfere with enjoying myself. I knew I was right about Kikyou being brought back. You are evil to resurrect her again, actually Naraku is the evil one for bringing her back again. I can't wait to hear how he truly pulled this stunt off and managed to turn the purity obsessed Kikyou into a youkai. It should be interesting as to how everyone is going to react when they realize who it is. Why am I suspicious of how well informed Naraku is? I suspect that he has a mole in the Council. I almost suspect the dragon but I think you are just making it appear that way because of past associations (Ryukotsusei) so I am not sure who is guilty (I hope not the cat for obvious reasons. *glances at user name* The fight was priceless, especially with Miroku and Sango siding with Inuyasha instead of their usual Kagome. I also got the giggles at picturing Inuyasha falling through the plane. I am not a big fan of the subjugation necklace, and I am glad that Kagome didn't use it, but the visual that you created gave me a case of the giggles. But I am wondering what is going on with Kagome because that did seem a little OOC for her. I am sure that you have an explanation, you are too good at keeping the characters in character to not have one. I am just going to go crazy wondering what twists are going through your wonderfully devious mind. I am not going back on the pins and needles waiting but I am curious as to what is coming next. *goes to find soft cushion to sit on*
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
for me, i dont think it truely is Kikyo... just that maybe its someone else that Naraku made to think its their memories or something.. anyways hmm i dont like that Dragon lord dude either.. *grrs* but hmm i wonder whats with Kagomes' attitude..
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 00:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww..man...kikyo is BACK?! Please don't let this be another loooong love traingle between those three. I'm sure Inuyasha already knows he wants kagome. And I can't see kikyo being evil after she died for real in the manga...but of coure she wuld be pretty pissed being brought back as a demon not only that but as naraku spawn!! Of course I still don't like kikyo but, I do feel sorry for her.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 20:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me 2 days to finally get caught up with this story (stupid interuption-sp?) I really love it. Is that really Kikyo? I can't wait till the next update.
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Reviewed By: KayAkuma On: October 28, 2008 22:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh noes! Thx for the cliffy... *sighs* I really hope Kagome and Yasha make up! (Yasha needs to say 'I love you', I'm a hopeless romantic like Kagome..) I'll also make sure to kill every opposing person on The Council if I have to!! (lol)
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you have all the other species represented and having an equal voice to Sesshomaru about youkai affairs. I really love that Shippou is equal to Sesshomaru, since as a child he was terrified of him. I truly believe that Kagome will be accepted by the others but it was good to see her being nervous over it and was facinating to see every one put in their two cents over what she should do to show off her powers without offending or terrifying the other clans. Is Kirara around to put her vote to the other cats about how good a friend Kagome could be to have. Kagome does have a soft spot for cats, look at Buyo. I am very curious as to why Inuyasha didn't respond to her declaration of love. Now would be a good time for Naraku to attack, it would cement Kagome's acceptance for sure, especially if she protected some of the others from harm. I am waiting on pins and needles for the next update, so please hurry because they are painful to sit on for long :-P
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 10:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can just imagan how hard that would be for her. She has never one to defend her self from verbal things only when it treatend her friends or herself. Then again it is treating her and her friends happyness as they may not be able to be togtehr if they say no. I woulder how they would all take it though as I could see inu willing to fight the whole console to keep her with her friends backing him.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 06:55 EDT
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i loved the teaser about inuyasha's love life in kagome's absence. i would worry more about a guy who would willingly go 500 years without anything. from his reaction when he left the council they must have asked some pretty personal questions. i hope you let us know what they were. it seems as if kagome is wondering if inuyasha has moved beyond her. when she told him that she loved him, and he didn't respond, coupled with her thoughts that he's too old for her now, really brought out the obstacles she's putting in her mind for them to overcome. is what she sensed at the end the 'when you least expect it...' moment? i think having all the world's major youkai players at one place, and occupied with judging kagome would be the perfect opportunity for a strike. great chapter, as usual. thank you for posting it.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 05:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* Oo i SOOOO wanna know what they asked Inuyasha to made me come out blushing LOL and n'aww Kagome said 'I love you' out loud!! n'awww!!
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Title: Update - YESH!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 03:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, update! *puts away lazy reviewer flag* :P I just caught that as am reading along -Inu fooled rounded? That couldn't have been the reason he hadn't said anything back to Kags when she told him she loved him, is it. I dunno, think Id be lookin his way with a few questions on my own for that alone. And what was it she felt at the end there that has us be handin by our finger tips, I wonder? Great chap, BTW, but think my pinkies are already starting to get numb from hangin on, hehe. Still, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 02:22 EDT
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thank you for the update, did you mean for it to end with the words "i am"? or did you forget a bit? either way i hope to get more soon.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 01:15 EDT
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a shard?! (just deleted the lyrics to 'trouble' from 'music man'. figured it would be too much read, sorry) ♣ one would think that she would be approved if all she needed was a majority vote. then again they could make her wait a few years. ♦ one feels sorry for both yasha and kagome. he must feel extremely guilty for accusing her of sealing the well and finding out that he was the one who destroyed it. then for not believing in her and then feeling he was unfaithful on top of it all. she is still a large part of his ego (self esteem) and right now she isn't sure of anything so all of the above would have a great effect on him. ♠ great chapter, can't wait for more! ♥ always a joy ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love you're story so much! What a great chapter! Jezzz...I wonder just how many women dog boy slept with. I just hope they get their happy ending.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty (at hell... waiting for my next class to start... another 3 hours to go....) On: October 26, 2008 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!! InuYasha can be so cute and so annoying... could drive a girl mad... Poor Kagome...
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 23:15 EDT
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Simply smashing! Ara is a hoot! All angsty and vibrant. Loved the little fluff and suprised at how well Kagome took the fact that Inu's been 'around' a time or too. Can't say I'd handle someone telling me that they had heard my man was 'heaven in bed'. You're evil with leaving it at the council break... so want to know what their decision was and perhaps what the questioned Inu about. Silly Inuyasha could have given Kagome a better response to her admission but I guess you can't expect much for that inarticulate boy. Great Chappy!
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