| "Pack Law" Reviews/Comments [ 323 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 07:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww dont worry ^___^ im pretty sure everyone here will wait for you :) hmm Inuyasha's emotions go through the ring? poor poor Kagome.. no wonder Kagome was more pissed.. having Inuyasha's angry wouldnt help XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2009 03:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter, (was Kagome having trouble concentrating because InuYasha was worried about her when she was in American do her studies???(the influence of InuYasha has no bounds lol!!!!!)) It seems like the internet its the only good thing in the modern world... I crashed my car on Wednesday, (I ran it into the gutter while trying to turn and the front left wheel is now against the back guard, due to the fact that we had hot weather two days be forehand, then it rained that morning.... so slippery road, not speed or anything... (I was in second gear... so only like 30 or 20 km/h (I have no idea what this is in ye old archaic standards...(lol I did French history in High school I know that the Imperial system was rather messy, and un-standardised, and its VERY funny that the Americans kept it, rather than getting rid of it as a display of their independence... )(now I'll go back to my other rant....) I think it was closer to 20 cause I knew that I had slowed down a lot because I had JUST thought I should slow down a lot more because it was raining...)) I'm fine but the insurance claim will be expensive (there goes what I made on boxing day (night) and probably all of what I made this week (Monday night, Wednesday, Thursday and today (Friday)) not exactly sure cause I haven't worked Day shifts in AGES (the Temp Place I work for KNOWS I will work the Friday night, AND NEVER ******* offers me the day shift (Friday was the only Day I was available other than the week end, (where they are most of the time closed)) I am Currently driving my dads car, so that is VERY good...
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Reviewed By: ---no name --- On: January 08, 2009 19:35 EST
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Sweet
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I haven't reviewed before, I usually don't anymore, but this story is absolutely wonderful!I just love it! And the thought of making a story like this, BRILLIANT! This is one of the most original stories I have ever read, and I am enjoying in immensely, One of my favorites actually. Hoping you update sometime soon, ~Hitsugaya630
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 17:16 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love that you have Kagome reaching Inuyasha this way. It is going to simplify and complicate their relationship tremendously. I can't wait to see the hilarity ensue. And Miroku is never going to let Inuyasha live down the fact the he led everyone right to her.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 15:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. I also like how the ring is what tieing her to him so much. Now the big thing is how much of it is 2 way. She is getting some from him but is her Aura slipping into him and they have not notice yet. I also wounder what the people with the stick up there @$$ will say about the ring since it was given to her before they where formed. At lest they have a very good possible loop whole now. Also not hiding it will slow down the typing.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: BlueKitten [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 11:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with this fanfiction! It's wonderful! I started reading it today and didn't stop, more like couldn't stop. lol I hope you update soon :) Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 09:57 EST
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if they aren't trying to kidnap her they're trying to control her or suck out her soul. i guess she can never get a break. with kikyo back and now kidnapped... you going to have them try to suck her soul and control her too? ♦ great chapter! no videos today unless you want depeche mode - 'i feel you' other than that i can always look for something from 'south park' or 'family guy'~ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ln8eSLbDTWU ♥
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 05:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! I just love kagome reaction to being kidnaped again. She's just gonna set there and wait for inuyasha while eating a sandwich or...riceball. So the RING was making kagome all wonkey. She can call out to him from the ring. What else does that ring do?
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Title: Ch 26 (1st revision)
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 04:09 EST
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G'day! Found your story from checking out the winners of the last IYFanguild awards - but I no longer read any messages or vote cos I don't have that kind of time anymore TT but, I would have considered voting for your story if I was still voting. It's only been a week since your last chapter, but I'd already kind of forgotten your original characters. Now that I think about it, Sarah isn't a Japanese name - who were her parents again...anyway, I've added you to my Favorites, so I look forward to your next chapter! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: January 03, 2009 02:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo Kagome has gone moody lol and you did some much when i was away... anyways truely love it ^___^ and once again Inuyasha is going to tie things up again.. how many times has he done that in the anime.. LOL
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 18:22 EST
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at first i thought that the changes in kagome were from being in proximity to the now youkai kikyou. but after inuyasha's remark about her scent, i think it has something to do with the ring. kagome said that her actions were more of what she would expect from inuyasha, and she couldn't understand why he was acting so understanding at times. could it be that personalities are merging? i can't wait to find out!
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Title: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 13:19 EST
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*heavy breathinh* You....Must .....write more, AHHHHHHH can focus, must read more...... but......*tears* NO MORE CHAPTERS WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA, i cant wait for the next *sniff* chapter, MORE PLEASE MORE, WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. *shudders and shakes ody*, ok now that, that is out of my system, Great story, Great plot, many oppurtunities, keep up the good work and ROCK ON!
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Reviewed By: Ichigohime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 12:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AH! I can't wait for the next update! While I have my own theories about Ki, I think I may wait to see how this progresses before revealing them. And I just don't understand how she can stay loyal to Naraku when he gets abusive like that.. but when you have no one else to turn to.. UGH! Gosh, I keep finding myself forgetting that Kagome is only 15 soon to be 16 in this story. It's so hard to remember that! And does this mean Hitomu has decided to not engage in his perusal of Kagome? lol. Update soon! And Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 10:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More we need more. Give us more now. Nice work. I like alot that they are finaly getting closer. I can not wait till the next part.
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