| "THE HIDDEN TRUTH(a kai love story)" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Shanaya On: May 27, 2018 01:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You nailed it!!! I mean it was aewsome, the way ypu described
ashley and kai's chemistry was nice and ya a continuation is a must
to have so just asking when are going to comtinue?? I mean uts a
story worth reading...... (from a kai hiwatari lover)
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Reviewed By: Shanaya On: May 27, 2018 01:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You nailed it!!! I mean it was aewsome, the way ypu described
ashley and kai's chemistry was nice and ya a continuation is a must
to have so just asking when are going to comtinue?? I mean uts a
story worth reading...... (from a kai hiwatari lover)
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Reviewed By: Shanaya On: May 27, 2018 01:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You nailed it!!! I mean it was aewsome, the way ypu described
ashley and kai's chemistry was nice and ya a continuation is a must
to have so just asking when are going to comtinue?? I mean uts a
story worth reading...... (from a kai hiwatari lover)
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Reviewed By: Anna On: November 26, 2017 07:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really amazing actually I'm a big fan but not too big
fan of Kai hiwatari and the character u had take I. e Ashley u
written that we assumed her as that she is me and her techniques ,
her simplicity, her Blade is so good and Kai's sympathy towards her
I just love it. I'm sure ur a good writer.... Seriously ur good.
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