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| "Honden" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: don't know if this will double post...
Reviewed By: melitza [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off, I am so sorry for taking SOOOooOOO long to review. I wanted to set aside enough time that I'd be able to read each whole story in its entirety all at once, and life has been crazy, soooo I kept going, "I'll do that next weekend!" and then "next weekend!" and, well... I have actually been practically salivating in anticipation though, and that's no lie. All I can say is that the reason these stories are lesser known is because they're in mediaminer. I've noticed that my own stories are far less viewed and reviewed on mediaminer than they are on fanfiction.net. However, there are obviously some mature elements that aren't allowed on fanfiction.net, sooo, I realize your hands are tied. You might want to consider also hosting these on adultfanfiction.net, however. The way you write leaves me breathless, as always, capturing me from the very beginning (the poignancy captured in "Kagome had not even smoked a cigarette yet" was just wonderful). The stark contrasting views you portray among the three women were wonderful in their differing complexity. The profoundness is just as much as in any of your works. I am actually a fan of shoujo-ai/yuri, though usually I strongly prefer a romance element to it. Somehow, you managed to make this work even without an over romance element, and even with both of the girls having heterosexual love interests. Wonderful. Just wonderful. Thank you so very much for sharing... The only critique I could give is that you give glimpses into Kagome's world - seedy little snippets that are wonderful... but they leave the reader wondering whether these are things that have happened, will happen, or whether they have no pertinence on reality at all. It would be nice to know, one way or another... Other than that.... perfection.
| Title: FINALLY!
Reviewed By: melitza-san On: August 31, 2008 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off, I am so sorry for taking SOOOooOOO long to review. I wanted to set aside enough time that I'd be able to read each whole story in its entirety all at once, and life has been crazy, soooo I kept going, "I'll do that next weekend!" and then "next weekend!" and, well... I have actually been practically salivating in anticipation though, and that's no lie. All I can say is that the reason these stories are lesser known is because they're in mediaminer. I've noticed that my own stories are far less viewed and reviewed on mediaminer than they are on fanfiction.net. However, there are obviously some mature elements that aren't allowed on fanfiction.net, sooo, I realize your hands are tied. You might want to consider also hosting these on adultfanfiction.net, however. The way you write leaves me breathless, as always, capturing me from the very beginning (the poignancy captured in "Kagome had not even smoked a cigarette yet" was just wonderful). The stark contrasting views you portray among the three women were wonderful in their differing complexity. The profoundness is just as much as in any of your works. I am actually a fan of shoujo-ai/yuri, though usually I strongly prefer a romance element to it. Somehow, you managed to make this work even without an over romance element, and even with both of the girls having heterosexual love interests. Wonderful. Just wonderful. Thank you so very much for sharing...
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