| "Fear The Scorned" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Title: please continue
Reviewed By: twinofdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST STARTED READING BUT I ALREADY ENJOY IT SO I HOPE THAT YOU WILL CONTINUE THE STORY. I LIKE THE WAY YOU HAVE GIVEN KAGOME A UNIQUE PERSONALITY AND ENJOY THE WAY SHE IS ALWAY SHOCKING THE BOYS.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really Well I hope you change your mind and do continuer writing this. I do look forward to more of your stories though in the future.
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 01:57 CDT
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OH Please dont stop writing this story it is hilarious and I just now found it. I think you have a great sence of humor with Kagome and the guys and its great fun to read.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 18:54 CDT
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i'm sorry for not reviewing, please keep writing this
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Title: you cant stop NOW!
Reviewed By: BlackBloodedAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have got to keep this story going! even if its not sent out publicly at least send it to ME!!!! haha wow i sounded so desperate right then. oh well, shows you how much i want you to finish this story. you know how you said that enjoy to write, well, i enjoy reading; and when i find a good story im determined to finish it. and i really really REALLY wanna know the ending to this story. so if you would be so kind as to finish it, i would be very thankful!!! good luck in your writing for the future!!!
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 10:41 CDT
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haha, ur version of Kagome is hilarious, and i love her interactions with the group, she's not all powerful, she's kind of ditzy and she's... a lot like me lol especially with the inner monologue. I can related to a lot of her thoughts. Love the story and good luck on the next chapter and whatever else you work on,you rock!
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Reviewed By: jem89 On: September 22, 2008 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is freakin hiliarious! Kag is just a slight bit of a nutcase and the guys are gonna be taken on a trip. Your writting style and creativity are really, really , great. Please don't be disheartened by the lack of review. Many just don't remember or have the time but still really like your story and wish you to continue. Please update soon : ) Thank you!
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 03:48 CDT
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don't you dare stop this story. it's to good. please write some more. i loved kagome's reaction to hiei. little firefly. that is so cute. update soon. i want to read some more!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is amazing please don't take it off i'm begging and i don't beg... ask the ex who cheated on me... please!!! don't get rid of the story... continue!!! i'll bake you a virtual cake, cookies, cupcakes, anything! ok done begging. i love the story, keep the suger highs going, lord knows they help!
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Reviewed By: Sola On: September 21, 2008 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been really enjoying reading this story....you have made me laugh so hard that I have had tears in my eyes...thank you for that.....this is one of the few stories that I have allowed my 10 year old daughter to read and I truely hope that you will continue this marvelous story.
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 19:44 CDT
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I love this story it always makes me laugh, I really hope you continue with it.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 18:47 CDT
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Just as an FYI, you don't use the English & Japanese in the same area (?) like, Miss Higurashi-san in chapter 2, it's like saying miss twice, so when using honorifics or whatever you call them choose 1, either the English OR the Japanese but not both. Hope this helps.
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Reviewed By: Sacred Hime On: September 21, 2008 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay I love Kagome's attitude it was very funny keep it up!!!
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 17:54 CDT
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You would threaten to discontinue this as it gets tot the good part. You really need reviews to enjoy posting a story? Well to each their own. No criticism meant. It was a good chapter and a horrible cliffy!(kudos to you) I hope to see more chapter, but if not then it was a good run.
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Reviewed By: kitkat13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 17:06 CDT
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This story s really funny. You do a wonderful job with witty dialogue. I really hope you update soon I can't wait to see their reactions.
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