| "The Closed Door Just Might Open" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 07:20 CDT
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haha thats the same thing i thought when i read it!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 23:42 CDT
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i guess it's the old 'anyone who my boyfriend pays attention to who isn't me is a threat' thing. is kikyo the kind of girl who will accept his true identity? will she freak when he does finally and 'out' him to the world because he deceived him? no! don't answer them, i'll wait and see as the story progresses. . . since you like 'inuyasha' you might like 'rurouni kenshin'... just remember that the anime is just filler after the 'kyoto arc' and to get to the end of the story you have to read the 'jinchuu arc' and the 'kenshin kaiden' in manga (onemanga[dot]com) you can check out the anime dubs on surfthechannel[dot]com -although i usually only watch subs ('rk' dubs are pretty accurate. 'inuyasha' dubs mispronounce names and add misleading dialog). enjoy! ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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Cute story, and I'm enjoying it so far. Kagome is very OOC, but thats okay... just very typical angsty teen drama girl. Sidenote: You've got anonymous reviews blocked, just thought I'd let you know. I don't know if it was intentional or not. Anywho, update soon!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 22:25 CDT
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it is devastating to loose a parent and you portrayed typical responses in both siblings. i think it is harder on the one who isolates herself and doesn't go through the whole grief cycle. your portrayal of kagome is well written and insightful. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 21:18 CDT
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i don't usually like the bouncing perspectives but this doesn't make me feel like i'm at a tennis match with too many instant replays. there are a lot of authors who unnecessarily repeat everything that happens in each scene. . . i like the gradual development of their relationship. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LunaStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT WAS THAT?!?!?! The teaser review you left on mine?! "Just pretend I'm another reviewer" WHAT THE HELL?!?! You know what? I'll just yell at you over the phone once I get the chance. Oh well still love your story! Even though I know what happens! I'm going to try to IM you tomorrow so be ready. LunaStar* WUVS U!
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Title: UPDATE PLEASE!
Reviewed By: Sara_bell_from_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 03:57 CDT
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Write more. Love the story. UPPPPPPPPPDDAAAAAAATTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: innocencedied2nite [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did really enjoy reading this. It wasn't what I expected, but still a nice read. You kept it inline with the typicla teenager actions and even the music choices. I like the twist on Sango and Kagome's characters. All in all, very original and the first person prospective works nicely. Well done
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