| "The Closed Door Just Might Open" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 14:41 CDT
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short chapters are better than 'no' chapters so i'm happy you wrote something in the interim. there was some good stuff and the interaction seems real, they're comfortable with each other like they've grown closer. i liked it. ♥ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 00:31 CDT
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Love the new chapter :). It was a good filler I really liked the internet convo and I really hope they realize its each other soon haha. And I know what you mean about being busy school just started for me to and its pretty insane this year :S. And thank you very much about the comments on my art :) I try very hard on those ^_^. But anyways keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I seriously want to know what is going to happen!! please! lol well I love the story so far and cant wait for more! keep up the great work! ^_^
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Title: great story!
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! as someone who is on deviantart and loves evanescence and everything i can really relate to kagome. Other than that though its still a great fun story, just like your other iniu yasha stories, keep up the great work. I think you should put more internet convos between them in, in the beginning it seemed like a much bigger thing than it has been and i think if you included it more it would help. Please update soon, and longer chapters would be appreciated. Arigato
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 07:21 CDT
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the 10 things i hate obout you refrence, singing and being chased by security that is what i ment...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 02:05 CDT
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funny stuff with sess/jak and yash/bank insults flying.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 17:21 CDT
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you could have had sesshoumaru check to see if he was decently covered as he would be sure she didn't want to see anything that would embarrass her. . . check to see if you can order dvd's at your community library to borrow and see if the 'rk' series is available. you can read the rest of the manga at onemanga[dot]com . . . good chapter. ~ ciao, ginny
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 07:20 CDT
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haha thats the same thing i thought when i read it!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 23:42 CDT
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i guess it's the old 'anyone who my boyfriend pays attention to who isn't me is a threat' thing. is kikyo the kind of girl who will accept his true identity? will she freak when he does finally and 'out' him to the world because he deceived him? no! don't answer them, i'll wait and see as the story progresses. . . since you like 'inuyasha' you might like 'rurouni kenshin'... just remember that the anime is just filler after the 'kyoto arc' and to get to the end of the story you have to read the 'jinchuu arc' and the 'kenshin kaiden' in manga (onemanga[dot]com) you can check out the anime dubs on surfthechannel[dot]com -although i usually only watch subs ('rk' dubs are pretty accurate. 'inuyasha' dubs mispronounce names and add misleading dialog). enjoy! ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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Cute story, and I'm enjoying it so far. Kagome is very OOC, but thats okay... just very typical angsty teen drama girl. Sidenote: You've got anonymous reviews blocked, just thought I'd let you know. I don't know if it was intentional or not. Anywho, update soon!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 22:25 CDT
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it is devastating to loose a parent and you portrayed typical responses in both siblings. i think it is harder on the one who isolates herself and doesn't go through the whole grief cycle. your portrayal of kagome is well written and insightful. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 21:18 CDT
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i don't usually like the bouncing perspectives but this doesn't make me feel like i'm at a tennis match with too many instant replays. there are a lot of authors who unnecessarily repeat everything that happens in each scene. . . i like the gradual development of their relationship. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LunaStar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT WAS THAT?!?!?! The teaser review you left on mine?! "Just pretend I'm another reviewer" WHAT THE HELL?!?! You know what? I'll just yell at you over the phone once I get the chance. Oh well still love your story! Even though I know what happens! I'm going to try to IM you tomorrow so be ready. LunaStar* WUVS U!
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Title: UPDATE PLEASE!
Reviewed By: Sara_bell_from_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 03:57 CDT
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Write more. Love the story. UPPPPPPPPPDDAAAAAAATTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: innocencedied2nite [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did really enjoy reading this. It wasn't what I expected, but still a nice read. You kept it inline with the typicla teenager actions and even the music choices. I like the twist on Sango and Kagome's characters. All in all, very original and the first person prospective works nicely. Well done
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