| "Maybe Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Lynx212 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this! I have to agree with Demitria Miriam, I think this would have done awesome as a multi-chaptered fic. You could always back it up to Sess saying "I hear you have a girl" and take it on a slower road from there... just my two cents. ^_^ Kudos and I hope to see more of your work.
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Reviewed By: Demitria Miriam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this idea a lot. I think you should have continued to write out in chapters instead of jumping to "just meeting," "are you seeing someone?" to "I love you". It would have been interesting to see their relationship progress. Good job though! -DM
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Reviewed By: dela1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good are you going to write mre to this
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