| "Raging Love" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: jo On: May 24, 2009 13:23 CDT
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Please update this story, it's one of the best IY/SS fics that I've come across in a very long time. It's original, interesting, and you obviously have spent some time writing it despite all the spelling and grammar errors. (Thinking back though, all I can remember is the mistake of "shock" for "shook" which happened a couple times.) Though I'm unfamiliar with Claymore, I feel that it doesn't detract from the story at all as it would have with most other crossovers. I enjoy reading your explanations and they're actually making me want to read Claymore when even my friends couldn't convince me to. I find Inuyasha and Sesshomaru's interactions with each other very in character too (for what you've done to them in the story). Even though they're different from their canon selves, you've made me believe in these versions of them totally, which very few IY writers can do. I hope you continue this story, and I'm sorry to hear about your knee. Hope you feel better soon -jo (Sending this from my sidekick, sorry I can't give you any ratings it's just showing me some dropdowns on a black screen.)
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 14:31 CST
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The last part was a little confusing, but great chapter
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 20:08 CST
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Holy crap! What is happening to Inuyasha!? This is terrible. I forget so much about Claymore's because I don't read about them. You've got me on the edge of my seat. I hope your knee gets better soon. That has to be very painful. Take care of yourself. Snow
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is wrong with their bodies? Did I miss that part? Either way now I'm trying to figure out who this new person id. And why did Yasha change just like Inuyasha would have?
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 08:52 CST
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It would be nice if u describe yasha's body that Sess saw. Its hard coming up with a mental image. I wonder who that other man was and how the claymores were made.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 08:37 CST
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I hope our yokai win.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 08:28 CST
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I watched a special on tv where a brother and sister & mother and son went on air talking about how they were seperated for a long time and when the met each other again one or both of them wanted to have sex with the other. I heard its some sort of pyhcological condition. This is what the chap reminded me of.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 08:18 CST
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I don't know much about the Claymore series but this seems like an interesting story
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Reviewed By: Demitria Miriam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Wow! I'm loving this concept! It feels very original! Great job! I can't wait to see how the feelings between Yasha and Sesshomaru develop! I look forward to your next chapter anxiously!! -DM
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 22:48 CDT
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This is awesome. I can see the conviction and determination in Sesshoumaru as being in character. Also, I get the idea that the Claymore truly is Inuyasha. I hope so and am crossing my fingers. You ended the chapter exactly as I would have. It's an excellent lead-in to the next. Oh, and there's the hint that Inu will go full demon. I'm excited to find out what happens. The chapter was short, but had more progression than some fics have in several chapters. I like that. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 18:25 CDT
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This is a very intriguing story and I'm excited to see what comes next. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: DPVS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories I ever had even seen and read . Please continue writing it !
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Reviewed By: Lanie12777 On: May 27, 2008 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, it's different from any other Inu fanfic I've read(which is a very good thing), the originality and plot of the story is excellent. Can't wait for the next chapter, really looking forward to it!^_^
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Reviewed By: dela1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sounds really goood cant wait for more
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a heartbreaking opening! I can't wait for the next chapter! B reading U!
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