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| "Curiosity" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Miss Shepherdess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it. It was very thoughtful and original. The characters stayed in character, too. The only complaint that I have is the large role that Roxas played in the end. It was not badly done, I just thought that Riku is definitely the one who needs to learn a lesson and perhaps I expected that lesson to come from Sora. It wasn't a disappointment though, but a very pleasant read. Thanks for writing it.
| Title: Aaaaawwwwwwww . . . . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was super adorable and wonderful and good, and many other thing positive. So I liked it. That said, I'm glad this is an AU, because he made Riku sound/talk/think like Xehanort's Heartless (Ansem, Seeker of Darkness). But then again, I'm one of the 1st to argue how alike those 2 are, so . . . . It fits, because of how striking it is (if that makes sense). But yes, sweet tender, and very nice. I luffed it, because outside of Riku's diction, everything else was perfectly in character. Good Job! I hope you continue to write.
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