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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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damn! i can't just wait for the night of the party. i bet Rukia will have Ichigo drooling all over her. that is definitely one hot dress. i can't wait for ichigo to see her all pumped up and glamd up. harhar, he is going to wet his pants for sure! you have such great timing. their relationship is progressing rather nicely. at least you didn't have them falling over each other in just a few chap. i love the way you have described and played out their budding relatiuonship. at least i wouldn't look too tacky or fast if they started groping each oher now. i love the sexual tension that you have been building also. starting from the time ichigo saw her in just a sports bra, to the sweet face massage, to this heart stopping mind churning topless meeting. i love it. as i have said the timing is just so perfect. i just wonder why someone would want them dead. i mean, when the sassasin described his target as someone with a routinary sched, i immidiately thought of rukia. why? and please don't let it happen before the party. i stil wouldlike to see ichigo's reaction!
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Reviewed By: Turtie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congrats on surpassing MMH :) Muhaha. My face was grinning all the way when reading the Kurosaki family Pacnic bit. Finally, Rukia's noticing his 'hotness'. I can't wait for nxt chappy. They are just gettin 'betta' n 'hotter' :D Sporadic updates? Does that mean ur going to update more sporadic frequently than usual? I hope so. That means there'll be sumthing to look forward to before Friday. Ur fanfics really brightens up my day. Keep up the great work :)
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 22:41 CDT
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["Yes my son!I'm doing it too! We can have a shirtless picnic party!"] Hahaha. I love the Weekly Kurosaki Family Pinic just because Ichigo gets all uncomfortable when Rukia runs by and ... Isshin. That guy is freakin' amazing. ;]]. I love how Ichigo got strawberry ice-cream. That was amazing. Pure amazing-ness. And then, YUZU! The observant little sister. I love it!=]] Great chapter! I loove this story!^___^ As always, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 21:56 CDT
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Oh Where do I begin...Okay let's start with the dress...is Ichigo going to wet himself when he sees her in that or what...And the park thing with his family, Karin is so observant. She calls it like she sees it and she doesn't mince her words either. Yuzu is just a little bit more subdued with it. Ichigo taking is shirt off, Yeah it was for Rukia's benefit. He likes her...and she likes him too. Who wouldn't after see that body. They won't be able to look each other in the eye now without some lustful fantasy running through their heads. And I can't believe Rukia admitted she like seeing Ichigo without his shirt. (Isabella90 jumps up and down giggling)...it was sooooooooo perfect. I loved it all. You did a superb job. I will be patiently waiting for your update. Have Fun.
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Reviewed By: Sato Miki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 16:10 CDT
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Hey!,I'm here too hehehe,I forgotto visit this site..I just wanted to tell you,pleas update soon!..I wanna know more!..what did she think about that 'touching' moment xD...
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Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 09:39 CDT
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The only complaint I have about this story is that it's not complete... so I have to wait for the next chapter! I am really enjoying this.
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 19:12 CDT
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I'm glad they finally had a moment where they were nice to each other!!:) I so wonder if Rukia will end up going to Isshin's clinic without knowing that he's Ichigo's father. That would be hilarious!!:) I'm wondering how Ichigo is going to be pulled into the evil plot against Rukia. I'm sure it'll help in getting Ichigo and Rukia closer together!!:) Good chapter and looking forward to the next one!!:)
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I absolutely loved that chapter!! It was the best! Oh the winning over teh best friend and the sexy but sweet face massaging and the creepy interruptions, it was all tooo perfect. Thanks again for another fantastic chapter I am literally at the edge of my seat wishing for the next!
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Reviewed By: Clipsed [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, so far my reviews have been along the lines of "OMGILOVETHISSSS!!!oneoneone". This, while probably full of gushing, is not. First off, I decided ages ago (well, it feels like it, though I've not even been reading fanfiction for a year yet) that you're my favorite when it comes to IchiRuki. That said, Odalisque is probably my favorite of your works in terms of premise and the way your write the characters, and especially the way Ichigo and Rukia interact. Though they're clearly different than their anime and manga counterparts, and the way you've written them in the past, I can easily see elements of both in the way you've portrayed them now. (Thumbs up; I find many writers make them too OOC, or pretty much cookie-cutter throughout their various fics). Personally, I think the character on the chopping block is Ichigo, courtesy of Aizen, who will have the assassin stage it so that it looks like Gotei Corp. is behind it, which would obviously be in their favor >=] Anyways, please keep up this brilliant fanfiction; should you fail, my army of penguins will eat you, kthanxbye. ^^;;
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 19:42 CDT
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Oh I so love your cliffhangers. They leave you wanting more. I love the scene between Ichigo and Rukia, it was sooo good. I love how in some of your stories, Ichigo is the one who falls first, but in this one it is more of a gradual thing. But I still can't wait to see the sparks of love and passion fly between them. However I will be patient. As for the intended victim...I am a HUGE Byakuya Kuchiki fan...with that said I have a feeling you are planning his demise...leave Rukia with control of his company, of course leaving Aizen with a reason to turn his interests to her (the sneaky B@#$%^$). I hope I am not right, but if I am...I know you will pull that story line off without a hitch and it will be fabulous. If no one has told you lately, you are a fantastic authoress...please keep up the wonderful work. And good luck with your first year of college.
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Reviewed By: YuyuKawai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Great!Great! Great!Great! Great! OMG finally! I loved this chapter completly :D..♥ Ihicgo is soooo horny hahahahhahaha! and I can't belive how creepy was Inoue in this chap... I do really hate her in this fic :S she interruped in that moment ..damn her! anyways awsome story...I'll be waiting AXIOUSLY, I really mean it! hugs, Yuyu°
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Reviewed By: shinigami_wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 11:03 CDT
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This chapter really made me smile. I can definitely see your Ichigo having improper thoughts about Rukia after seeing her half-naked in the park. I can definitely see Momo getting all fan-girlish over Ichigo (and I love that the two have already met). But Rukia sitting still while Ichigo ran his hands on her face?!? What a big surprise. I like that she is also changing towards him (as he is towards her)... And I like that she didn't give him such a hard time for that tender moment... This chapter rocks.
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Title: Chapter 12
Reviewed By: Anbu_Kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every hour I'm awake, I'm counting down till I get to read the next chapter of this fanfic. I absolutely love it. I think it is my all time favorite Bleach fanfic. The detail, the plot, the characters, the tension, the mystery...I'm addicted to every written word, I hang on every word. I've re-read this chapter alone three times. And the whole story so far all together about seven times. I cannot wait for more.
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot I really really enjoyed this chapter! Man Ichigo seems to be getting a lot nicer towards Rukia. Obviously he finds her sexually attractive and the way you've written his character it may seem that might be the only thing he is interested in....Or is it? I guess maybe Rukia's personality that he first found so endearing to now actually finding himself to stand and quite possibly enjoy her presence. And man that little scene in their office with him checking if she had a fever was so sweet! Ah IchiRuki fluff is always awesome even in small dosages XD I wonder how this effects their current status and what it will lead to in the future. What plot device do you have for them getting together I wonder? Gah whatever it is I'm sure you'll pull it off nicely! And the little conversation with the two mystery people in the end. Someone is going to be eliminated? I wonder who, why, and how this will effect the plot as well as Ichigo and Rukia. Well, all in all a splendid chapter I look forward to your next update. Its always such a treat to find out when your story is updated in my inbox and I just can't wait to read! Update soon! =]
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha once again another good chapter. So Ichigo is starting to notice Rukia in a different lime light and is aware of her sex appeal. Well he still hates her, but now hes transcended to having a different view of her. Hmmm I wonder how this will play when ti comes time for them to work together in the office. Will he be able to control himself and concentrate or falter? hehe I look forward to seeing what you have up your sleeve. =)
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