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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 19:03 CDT
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phenomenal! wasn't expecting momo AT ALL! i love the direction this story is heading towards
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Reviewed By: ecogirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 12:13 CDT
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oh. my. god. ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod! NOOOOOO! They can't be separated now! I bet it's her brother on that couch, ready to ream her out for being so stupid. ARUGH! Or is it Ichigo, who somehow beat her home and is *going* to find out what is going on... ARUGH! I put off reading this until I handed in my midterm... now I'm so glad I did, since I wouldn't be able to concentrate on anything until next update! I can't wait for Rukia to knock Inuoe out. I'd do it myself if I could... This is quite possibly the best story I have ever read. It's been a long time since something has kept my attention for so long and has remained a page-turner. You rock! Please don't keep us waiting too much longer for more!
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2009 14:28 CDT
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i've been counting down the days till your next update...2 more days! *froths at mouth* xoxo, your most faithful fangirl
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Reviewed By: haji_quest33 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 00:09 CST
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All I can say is wtf!!!! Oh my gosh, first I am really mad at yamamoto, second poor Rukia and Ichigo, he better come and save her soon. And can someone please step on Inoue already that girl needs to be kicked! I need the next update! I cant wait!!!!!! Great chapter!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Isabella90 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 17:31 CST
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I read this chapter three times...I cryed to first time and was mad the other two. And my verdict...Well...What can I say...but another brilliant chapter update. Now, with that said, I want to say my heart broke with this chapter. I almost felt like giving up reading this story again at its harshness, but I didn't because this chapter was very necessary. Rukia needed to be removed from the situation. Ichigo has to be the one on her sofa, so they can fight and realize they were both used. I would have loved for it to be her brother...which it probably is anyway ...but at this point...Ichigo and Rukia's relationship in this story needs to be mended...please :( Don't pull them apart like this...keep them together so they can fight this through...together. Hopefully, this chapter will be the turning point to see who is friend and who is foe...to them both. Toshiro could believe Rukia for the simple fact...he believes Aizen was the one who raped Momo. Now, you see, you have a spy in both companies...Ichigo and Toshiro, with Rukia and Momo on the outside with Renji and Byakuya there to help bring Aizen down...of course there are others and I will be waiting patiently to see how you work them into this story. Great Job and sorry for on reviewing sooner.
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Reviewed By: xXdonutsXx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 13:07 CST
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OH .... MYGOD!
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Reviewed By: MinatsukiRukiaChou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 12:37 CST
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Holy crap Oh my God oh my God oh my GOD The rain begins again...best chapter, i think i nearly cried. I despise Aizen and Inoue, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Xalcro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 10:31 CST
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Best. Chapter. Ever.
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Reviewed By: TaleWeaver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2009 05:20 CST
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Ow ow ow ow ow!!!!! That hurts, and that was just from Rukia's meeting with Ukitake and Yamamoto; even before that boil on humanity's backside Orihime did her little smirking 'hee hee'. Seriously, Orihime IS going to die slowly and painfully, AFTER she realises just how much she's been used and how contemptible she is, right? Because if she doesn't, I will be very very disappointed with you. Ichigo needs a big, big, wallowing scene - after all, he's going to get off scot free, aside from losing Rukia - which is very very bad, true, but he's not faced with unemployment, blacklisting (cause who the hell's going to hire Rukia now, when everyone's going to think that she deliberately betrayed her company?), and oh yeah, one of the people she admires most in the world thinking she's... well, Orihime. So who's on the couch? If it's Momo, nows the time to prove her BFF stripes (which I actually believe this version will do admirably!) I kinda hope it's Byakuya, who will step up and actually believe in her, and be supportive. (hey, he had almost as big a switch in canon, and people can seriously re-arrange priorities after they almos die!) And then he can go Senzabora on Aizen's ass (because somehow? I never did buy his near-death as a coincidence.) If you'll forgive me, I don't think I'm going to read any more chapters until things have brightened a little.
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Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 22:35 CST
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That is too sad................. :(
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Reviewed By: Brokenx3Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 22:14 CST
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MY GOD. That was a brilliantly written chapter! You've captured all the right emotions....I can personally relate to Rukia, so amazing job with that! Keep at it! :] And that damn Ulqiorra...it's all his fault! *grumbles to self and wanders off to find a dartboard and pic. of ulqiorra's face*
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 21:42 CST
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This chapter was wonderful! And awfully sad! ='[ UPDATE SOON! -Liz
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 19:38 CST
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HOLY HELL that was some intense stuff there...so please dont wait a week to update....I need to know who is sitting there...PLEAAASSEEEE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Clipsed [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 18:18 CST
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I hate you, though I do so in the friendliest way possible. That was a HORRIBLE way to end the chapter, and now I have to wait a week! D:
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 14:54 CST
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This was my first time reading your story. It was a good story it had a few grammar errors here and there. I like the way you did the relationship between Rukia and Ichigo it was very tasteful. Also they way you are writing Inoue is funny I could see her trying to break them to up again. Well keep up the good work and update soon.
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