| "Divide and Conquer" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Title: Ch 6
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:43 CST
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OMG, did I love this chapter. Heero's method of getting Duo to take that antibiotic was certainly attractive (damn, that would sure work for ME). Duo's reaction was great, and I like how Heero took the wind out of his sails with telling Duo he could hit him. Will be interesting to see if Duo takes him up on that offer later on.
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: December 19, 2003 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man that was great, you have got to hurry and update. Please, im dying to know what happens. Hey can this be a 2x5 instead of 1x2? Well, keep up the good work. Chow Babe
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Title: Ch 5
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:31 CST
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(checks date of ch. 5)...EVIL! You left it at that point for ten months? I'm almost afraid to read chapter 6 now! Poor Quatre has a combination of good and bad firsts going on for him. I am looking forward to the next chapter, but what will I do after I've read that one?
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Title: Ch 4
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:25 CST
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Nice bit of intrigue with exactly what happened between Heero and Craig and the whole "taking him out" incident. I like this strong, smart, savvy Duo.
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Title: Ch 3
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:11 CST
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I like the way you've set up the tension in this. Wow, I was working on writing something that involved a slightly similar situation, except in a completely different direction. It was kinda eerie to see it, seeing as I'd just written mine yesterday, even if they are really nothing alike. Sorry to go way off topic there! Interesting to see the way Heero handled himself after overhearing the Rauders' little discussion. WuFei's confusion regarding Duo is priceless.
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Reviewed By: Ch 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 22:00 CST
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Gotta love WuFei's tact. I am fast becoming fond of this story, with the way the situations are handled and how everyone is portrayed.
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Title: Ch 1
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 21:51 CST
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I LOVE AU high school fics, and I really like the way you've introduced Quatre and Duo. Their performance on the basketball court was completely believable, and I think WuFei is in for a few surprises. I also liked the way you had Heero musing over Trowa's preferences. You've done a nice job of giving depth to the characters already.
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 18:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, please write more! Tabiku Iakkin
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Reviewed By: Devina On: December 06, 2003 07:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, ur not leaving it at this are u? please write another chap i wanna know what happans! good story! greetings a crazed fan XD
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Reviewed By: Anarchy On: November 17, 2003 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Horrible spot to leave this please continue at least one chapter more
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Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man and you left it like that!? How could you, you have to save Quat. Please... Looking I'm begging. Please. Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 18:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
Would you STOP with the cliffhangers! At least, if you're going to cliffhang me, at LEAST update quickly. I mean, really. Sheesh, leaving poor Quatre drowning face down in a tub... Ah, the cruelty. Just unbelieveable. *sniffle* |
Reviewed By: amy_yah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 11:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*rolls over and dies of pure joy* I have never seen such a cunning story...well from any other author that is. Brilliant use of settings, personalities, character stereotypes and the storyline is amazing. I really love how this comes together and yet leaves you wondering. Confusing but utterly enjoyable. |
Reviewed By: Na On: February 28, 2003 20:54 CST
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Hope 2 c more of this fic. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat On: February 21, 2003 22:46 CST
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Interest story. G-boys reasonably in character, poor Quatre. At least he won't be raped, right? The others will be there in time to save him. I like the fact that the G-boys don't immediately fall in with each other like most school fics. Duo's a street rat of course he's going to be suspicious of everyone. |
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