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| "Doggy Style" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Lovewray [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2017 17:22 PST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry but the end of that last chapter was complete bs. Like
come on kagome was being a power hungry bitch when she didn't get
her way as always and her her damn self and then sango came to her
rescue as always. I had no problem with that , I did heave a
problem with the hole Ik ur pain and him hugging her part but even
then I didn't mind , it's the end that has me. How is he gonna
apologize yo kagome and everyone, I mean if he just said bye to
miroku and maybe sango then I would have been like on but shit it's
ur story ig to do with what u want, I have no say, just updated
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 00:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon if possible
| Reviewed By: Isis191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 11:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful start. I'm really looking forwaard to seeing where you take it. Please, up-date soon. Thanks !!!
| Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2008 20:16 PDT
Comment/Review:
this is a great story, i hope to read more soon.
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