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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 03:21 CDT
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I love thw story please update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: MaroonWolf18 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. I really like it. I only have time to read enough chapters to get the one called, uh.. Death to the lovers, or something of that nature (sorry, memory slightly fuzzy). My name is Amanda. I am an InuYasha FANATIC! I am also writing a fanfic about it. My very first one. I am currently working on the second chapter, and I already have 155 views, altogether, from both chapters. No reviews, quite yet, but yeah. If you would like, you can go and read my FanFic. The subject is InuYasha. And the title is thus: Full Moon Wedding If you do manage to read it, that is... if you would even want to, let me know, in a review, how it is, to you, so far. I update it every day, but... due to my home life, and a fiance and four kids, and my birthday being literally in 8 days (I'll be 18), I have a lot to deal with... So, whenever I do update it, it is usually a paragraph.. or two or three, and sometimes four, at a time, until I find the time, during that same day, to get back unto the computer. Reply to this if you wish. I would deeply appreciate a review on mine. And please be honest. But... just as your summary: Please go easy on me. It's my first fanfic. Welp! I will patiently await your reply, and for a possible review!! Take Care, and keep up the good work. I would love to see more fanfics from you, regardless the characters in it. --Amanda/MaroonWolf18 Email:: DarkEvesWolf17@Aol.Com or FangBarer17@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 11:34 CDT
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update soon. i have a feeling that the attraction between kagome and "kaine" is about to get explosive.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 13:11 CDT
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thank god kikyo is dead. i feel bad that Inuyasha had to die though. story is getting interesting especially since there is an attraction starting between her and "kaine". update sson.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 23:08 CDT
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okay i am ng for someone to kill kikyo, she so needs to die. i think that it's cute that kagomes friends want to play matchmaker between her and sesshomaru. update soon.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 02:55 CDT
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ok kill kikyou, i dont really care i've seen fics where she ends up being good and ones where she's evil and even ones where she's just indifferent. but i dont think kagome should kill her, i think that one day inuyasha will realize what he did to kagome (after all he'll live a LONG time unless he's killed) and will ask kagome for her forgiveness, but it's unlikely if kagome killed kikyo. i think naraku or another bad guy should kill kikyou, kagome, sango, ect will be glad she's dead (again) but they wouldnt have had to do it themselves.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 16:19 CDT
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so kagome decided to emulate sesshomaru, i hope he can change her back.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 14:40 CDT
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okay i think i like this kagome. she really went off on kikyo. good for her. this is getting good. thought it was pretty cool that she has a big white dog tattoo on her back. gee? was she thinking of sesshomaru at the time? interesting. update soon.
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Title: kool
Reviewed By: lil-lostii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 05:55 CDT
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kool Kagome is s freakin kool :D keep it going update soon!
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Reviewed By: ladieicz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 03:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice to see a dark fiction.
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Title: reborn
Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 23:23 CDT
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keep going i love this dont stop and make sure u make inuyash pay in this story for hurting kagome so much make him pay!!!!!!!!!!!!! (laughs evily) bye
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Title: Thankyou
Reviewed By: Cutipie389512 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 13:05 CDT
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Thanks all of you fo rthe reviews it helps towards making better chapters. Well yeah i was going for the cold thing for Kags its different for her and its new because as i see it Kags is walways the one getting hurt and being happy if ya know what i mean new percpective
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 12:47 CDT
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i am not sure about this kagome yet. this kagome is much colder than an iceberg. she is interesting though. she certainty peaked sesshomaru's interest. you left a cliffy which leaves everyone curious about the next chapter. very nice. update soon.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 01:09 CDT
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this one is interesting, i'm not yet sure if i like the way kagome is.
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Title: reborn
Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2008 22:22 CDT
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omfg!!!!!!!!!!! that is so good keep going i love it dont stop plz
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