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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 15:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story! You're doign a great job and I can't wait for the next update. I like that, unlike most stories, you didn't exaggerate the whole "virgin pain" thing. And you weren't afraid to throw Sango in a bed with InuYasha! Props to you. ;p
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 14:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, this story is defintely going on my favorites. It's very original and tastefully written. Update soon! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 10:55 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice lemon here. I like how Inuyasha is so concerned over Kagome's pleasure. Of course Sango and Kagome are going to become friends, but I can't wait to see how the others react to Kagome. It should also be interesting to see if Kagome wins the servants over to liking her after a while. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2008 07:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhh this is SOOO good!!!! its weird to see the Characters from InuYasha with other new characters who have middle eastern sounding names (I wouldn't know exactly where they come from, so that probably means my high school education in a very mixed cultured school wasn't very good... (but then again I think a lot of Muslims (and others from the middle east) were in year levels below me .(we had an influx of islanders (native people from the islands of Australia (where I live))) Where did you find your names?? some were very nice (and some are so hard for me to think of how to pronounce (lack of vowels).
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