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| "Ten" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: eyre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was amazing. I enjoyed it a lot. I hope you keep writing because you do it pretty good. Of course I'd love to read another talk. Maybe I'd love to something about Bulma admitting her growing feelings for him and Vegeta confusion about her. I'd love to watch them interact, as you have been doing. I loved the fact that they match the original characters. I loved what you said about Vegeta respecting her father, about the chat between saiyans, about he trying to push her away. I'd love to see him trying to do that again and having a big surprise about it. If you could add a chapter about the GR exploding and the talk after that it would be great. Oh and about Yamcha either. I loved the way you explained things, so real and logic. you reflect their personalities at 100%. You had a couple of typos there, but it wasnt a great deal. The descriptive way, the kind of words you used. Hey! you are really great at this. Sincerely, Eyr.
| Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
very very very well written!!! I'm impressed and curious for the next conversations...you really reflect vegeta's personallity well! great job and I hope you update soon! Lovies EV
| Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow .. intresting.. it shows what could have happened.. i liked that,, plz update soon,, so far my favortive on was the first one
| Title: Cute, emotional, very Veggie.
Reviewed By: Badtzy On: June 22, 2008 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was a pretty original conversations as far as B/V interaction goes. Really an enjoyable read. I hope you continue on with this.
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