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Reviewed By: anny On: December 04, 2008 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oow, its so adorable =D loved iit, please update itt! will there be any lemon on later chapters?? xx
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Reviewed By: Evil - Vegeta On: December 01, 2008 17:33 CST
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You know..one of these days I'm making it my mission to actually log in :P anyway..loved it again..just like i did last time..and the time before that..and the time before that..you catch my meaning? I simply love love LOVE those conversations and you really catch Vegeta's caracter good..he's so confused and scared..but still as though as we know him to be. You really make me jealous of your talent! Never, ever, stop writing! I'm wating for your next conversation..hell I can't wait! Hurry up!!:P nah..take your time..just teasing yah! Till later! Big kiss EV
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2008 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh goody update. I never really liked Yamcha so I'm glad he got the boot, but the vindictive bitch in me was sorry Bulma didn't kick his ass a little more, or Vegeta..that would have been nice. I love the last line.
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Reviewed By: annna On: November 03, 2008 10:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ooh this chap was so cuute :D please update it!!
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta (once again not logged in..gods I'm lazy:P) On: November 03, 2008 04:55 CST
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I can't believe you hate this one!! Because once again (yeah I know, it gets boring:P) I loved it!!! the only thing that suprised me is how soft vegeta is getting..maybe a bit to soft?? but no matter..as i said..still loved it!!! so no worries! you're doing great and I'll be waiting for your next update like I did for every past update;-)! Lovies EV
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 12:35 CDT
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Awww that's so sweet. I wish I could cuddle with Vegeta. I like how he's becoming more open and comforting with Bulma.
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta (just nog logged in) On: September 17, 2008 12:10 CDT
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great great great! Super!! You REALLY know how to write those conversations!! As in REALLY ,/b> know!! You are amazing! I'm waiting for your next piece of art! Lovies EV
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Reviewed By: Slinky Chan On: September 10, 2008 21:22 CDT
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Update soon. I'll be checking this web site to see if you updated.
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta talking openly about sex, priceless. I don't know why, but I always pictured Vegeta to be a blusher when it came to conversations on sex, but I like the logical matter-of-fact way you had him speak about the Saiyan sexlife too. Another great chapter!
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loooove Vegeta/Bulma fics especially ones before they 'get together'. I think this is just an excellent idea and you've kept them very closely in character. I have a request/suggestion for a conversation: Vegeta's childhood, specifically his relationship with his mother, if he even had one (relationship with her that is). Just something I've always kind of wondered about him. Keep up the good work, really, it's great. And this chapter was so not garbage!^^
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 16:49 CDT
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am i the only one then who thinks that this chapter is good?? no way right!! it's good :P no worries there! I'm curious for the next topics...maybe human relationships?? veggie always has problems understanding those! :P but it's up to you! I'll just wait for the next chappie!! the others were great too btw!! Lovies EV
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Reviewed By: eyre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was amazing. I enjoyed it a lot. I hope you keep writing because you do it pretty good. Of course I'd love to read another talk. Maybe I'd love to something about Bulma admitting her growing feelings for him and Vegeta confusion about her. I'd love to watch them interact, as you have been doing. I loved the fact that they match the original characters. I loved what you said about Vegeta respecting her father, about the chat between saiyans, about he trying to push her away. I'd love to see him trying to do that again and having a big surprise about it. If you could add a chapter about the GR exploding and the talk after that it would be great. Oh and about Yamcha either. I loved the way you explained things, so real and logic. you reflect their personalities at 100%. You had a couple of typos there, but it wasnt a great deal. The descriptive way, the kind of words you used. Hey! you are really great at this. Sincerely, Eyr.
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Reviewed By: Evil-Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 14:57 CDT
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very very very well written!!! I'm impressed and curious for the next conversations...you really reflect vegeta's personallity well! great job and I hope you update soon! Lovies EV
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow .. intresting.. it shows what could have happened.. i liked that,, plz update soon,, so far my favortive on was the first one
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Title: Cute, emotional, very Veggie.
Reviewed By: Badtzy On: June 22, 2008 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was a pretty original conversations as far as B/V interaction goes. Really an enjoyable read. I hope you continue on with this.
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