| "You Are MINE!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 72 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 10:03 EDT
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omg, i think this is the first time reading breast sex. o.O and wow it was...good....xD man i sound so perverted. anyways, another great chapter. cant wait to find out wat secret kagome has!! update soon! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 03:48 EDT
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wow is all that i can realy say here. but there are a couple thing i wonder. But WOW!
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 23:07 EDT
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well finally buddy, lol. ONce again, you did NOT dissappoint. Cant wait 4 more. LATER!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasharoks528 On: August 05, 2008 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this story... i cant wait to find out what is going to happen next!
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Title: Loved It
Reviewed By: Hollywood1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 05:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! it's so interesting and different it draws me in.I like how you played outside of the characters some and how you get very detailed. It's a excellent story and I will start reading some of your other fan-fics just because of this one. Im sorry to hear that MM isn't assisting you in the proper way and I think it sucks. But I will try and be patient and wait for your next update^^
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Reviewed By: chrissy_kool On: July 19, 2008 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update im dyeing here plez ur great
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 01:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW are you going to continue writing this I want to see what you write next!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: chrissy_kool On: July 09, 2008 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fuck i love and ur write its so good im not in to this stuff but u "sucked me in" lol and now im baging u to please write more PLEASE!!!! chrissy ps ur awsome
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Reviewed By: kysha82 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story, i like the way inuyasha is so dominate. i wonder what kagome's big secret is and is she going to dominate him too. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Alotta Profit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 22:12 EDT
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Thank You! Someone finally comes out and says that Prince is useful (and the shiz, but you didn't say that. After all, why put him on your ipod if you didnt like him...) No one I know will say that they like Prince, and I'm almost a borderline fanatic. Anyway, I am among the ones that aren't afraid of the outside of the box, so I'll stay tuned.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 18:45 EDT
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lol. no wonder they're in parts. aww, still looking forward to that big lemon you've been warning us bout but...guess i'll have to wait. ;) anyways, wow, this IS kinda scary to read. buh its kinda biased really; like u WANT inu and kag have sex so u dun feel that this is actually rape. but this chapter, wow, it DOES really give u an image of rape and such. great job and cant wait for the next chapter! (and i wonder how kag will start enjoying this...or will she ever?!) Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: inuyashaxkagomeforever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 14:47 EDT
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gr8 chapter! also im not sure now cuz i think InuYasha was bein a lil 2 harsh 2 Kagome. i mean like yeah she has no expercise then he like ATTACK HER (in a animal prey type way) soo now idk if Kagome should b freaked or pleasured O_o owell ur story! anyways love it! update soon!!
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Kenzie On: July 07, 2008 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an AWESOME read! I love the spin u put on it and i got real enjoyment out of it. I've always been a big fan of a more 'dominant' Inuyasha and u got it perfectly! I loved the art setting and Inuyasha being a teacher was very creative =D Not enough people make Inuyasha so dominant and animalistic and i am thrilled that i finally found an author who does! Please keep writting, Im Hooked!
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 15:18 EDT
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wow thats all that needs to be said about that chapter. only one thing you were talking about rape in the begining is inuyasha going to rape her or does she agree with it. write more chapters please
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! wow.. wow.. just update soon..
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