Reviewed By: sweetdeily (not logged in) On: September 14, 2008 08:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
mmm, very much liked this one. The characters were just.... ohh, perfect. Very IC the whole way through, there were a couple of grammar errors you might think about next time, but otherwise you had great flow. The dialogue was good, the description was detailed and the lemon, whilst glossed over, was steamy enough to be interesting. You didn't drown us in otakunese and the story was easy to follow, related WELL to the series and did I mention very believably IC? It seems most Bleach authors can't understand this basic principal that it's possible to write the characters, in character, and still make the story good. You've proven that its just poor effort on their part. I like this very much, you're going on my favourites list. ^_^
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