| "Missing Sibling" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bright_Anarchy On: March 11, 2003 08:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Great ending. Hilarious. Perfect!
The campy ending celebrates the whole style of the story and in a fun and humourous way.
You had a little of everything, some bashing, some loving, some lost siblings, some gratutitous magic use, some every girl grab a guy, some pranking, some mocking angst, some happily ever after. The story pokes fun at everything SM/GW fanfiction tends to be and that's why I loved it.
My only complaint is the guys didn't blow anything up. |
Reviewed By: Crystalstorm21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 21:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Good chapter.I liked Usagi's revenge.I hope the next chapter is up soon. |
Reviewed By: LaLa Baby Love Gangsta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stoys is great keep it up holla back Lol! |
Reviewed By: LaLa Baby Love Gangsta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stoys is great keep it up holla back Lol! |
Reviewed By: LaLa On: October 09, 2002 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the stoys it's off da hook please more don't let me down!!!! Lol Love ya Story Write More SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Crystalstorm21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 09:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hope you do have the next chapter up soon.I enjoyed reading this one. |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: October 07, 2002 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
i have really enjoyed this and can't wait to see what usgai (sp) has done - and can't wait to see what else you can do |
Reviewed By: Leaping Fawn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv your story!!!! Especially Usagi's revenge on the girls! Please write more!!! |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2002 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey hey!!!
I really liked this chapter and i hope that there will be more to come
I know how you feel having V-ball till 6.. I have it as well in my school....wait... r u JUST starting school???? wowo!!
ive been in schoo for like.....a month. lucky....or i could have missunderstood and jst mad a fool of my salf HAHAHAHA!
Well anyway, I just thought that I shoud tell you that i can relate to you not having a lot of time to write and that I am sure that when you get out the next chapter that it will be great!!!!!
Keep it up!!!!!!
Ja ne!!!
voidsenshi |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2002 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still have to finish the rest of the story yet but while I was reading I noticed 2 small mistakes.
1) Duo doesn't have brown eyes.They are cobalt blue (some say purple or pursian)
2) I guess that some people spell that Heero Yuy they way that you did but this is they way that I have always seen it done.
Don't get me wrong this is constructive criticizem. I really Like it so far and I'm going to finish readig it now. I'll review again once I am done. |
Reviewed By: voidsenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2002 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Voidsenshi:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! MORE! MORE! I MUST....READ....MORE!! *LOOKS AROUND THE ROOM ALL FRANTIC-LIKE* YOU MUST CONTINU *SMACK* *Hayama-san comes in and smacks her over the head*
Hayama: Would you calm down!!! If you're going to ask, at least do it somewhat civilized!
Voidsenshi: *ouchies* Pwease continue? *looks at Hayama*
Hayama: *sigh* *shakes head*
v: *smile* This is really good and I really want you to continue as soon as possible.
H: better |
Reviewed By: IycedRoze On: August 10, 2002 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIIIII
ME LIKE ME LIKe... PPLLLLZZ ADD MOOOORRRREEEE SOOOOOONN lol, onegai?!?!?! okie, well ima go! Ja!
*Roze |
Reviewed By: Crystalstorm21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 17:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice story so far.Let Duo get Mina to help set Usagi up with Quatre.Post more soon. |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 07:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
your so mean. you left it right there. i wanna know what happens. plzplzplzplzplzPLZ post more ASAP
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: rino_serenity On: July 15, 2002 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to continue. will someone stop her before the sword slices her skin and will she die. i have to know what will happen. Please don't take a month before you continue this story. it is really good. plus i want to know who usagi will fall in love with, and will she ever be able to stop blaming herself for all those deaths. |
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