Title: Yum, yum, yum. Reviewed By: helluin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 20:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: [Incoherent expletive] When I saw the story title here, I pounced on it, having read the earlier chapters. I was afraid you'd left them hanging. The most recent installment lived up to the promise of the earlier chapters. Well-written pr0n is so hard to come by. You made it graphic without it being obscene, and managed to keep them IC and explore their feelings while delivering delectable bedtime reading material. Thank you!
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