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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 23:31 EDT
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That was completely unexpected! I really enjoyed the description of the fates working their "magic" or spell or whatever. It was really beautiful. But I was NOT expecting TWO women to appear. (And certainly not looking like lovers. ^_~) I also really liked their words to Souta. That was well done. I certainly understand you not being able to update for a while. (Even though Hiei dancing around naked still sounds good to me!) But, I will be anxiously waiting to see what happens next here. Take care of yourself!
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Reviewed By: iguana girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 09:30 EDT
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well i am glad that you can wright at all, my mom did not start wrighting stuff till me and my yunger sis were 15 and 16
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 07:47 EDT
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Very interesting chapter! I liked the three fates being there to set right a wrong committed long ago. The conversation with Hiei contained a nice bit of foreshadowing. I really enjoyed the way you wrote Yusuke in this one, as well as the sweet bit of fluff between Kuwabara and Botan. I am really looking forward to seeing what souta's reaction to being taken to the Reikai is, as well as the results of the fates' "fixing." Now, since it looks like I am the only one (at least on this site) who said anything at all about your last chapter being short, I want to let you know that I only mentioned it in response to YOU saying that your chapter was short. You apologized for it being so short, so in my review I said yes, it was a short update, but that you had packed a lot of good stuff into it. I wasn't criticizing or complaining about the length at all, -- I was actually trying to give you a huge compliment. I'm sorry to hear about your son's health problems. I am the mother of 4 children myself, including a daughter who has had three surgeries in the last year-and-a-half. I have also lost 4 family members in the last five months, and consequently have not been able to update my own chapter story. So you will never hear me tell anyone that they don't update quickly enough or that their updates are too short, and I am sorry if you thought I did. I hope you will be able to continue your writing as your time allows because I have been enjoying it.
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Reviewed By: fhfh^ On: July 25, 2008 05:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! Is this going to me a three pairing or just two? I can't wait for you to update! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 02:18 EDT
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Hmmm. It was a short update, but you've given us some hints about what is going on. It appears that Jii-chan is either deceased or moved away. Souta was un-barricading the well house. Very interesting. Kurama and Hiei seem to believe that the necklace around his neck makes him the person they were looking for, -- can we figure out why? ^_^ So many questions, though. Who barricaded the well house in the first place and why? Was Kagome on the other side? Is she STILL on the other side? Can we laugh at Kurama if Yusuke was right and he just knocked out some poor, innocent guy to drag him off to the Reikai? ^_^ Looking forward to your next installment!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 21:45 EDT
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i'll play too! hey madmiko!!(=P) my favorite is yasha/kag but i will tolerate kurama/kag. . . now seriously, interesting set up. i shall wait patiently until you reveal their assignment and what the file contained. one wonders why souta has the jewel and where kagome is but i'm sure you also disclose this information in your due time. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: minmay7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 19:04 EDT
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Very interesting...I like the way you've set this up! I wonder what the pairings will be..I'm hoping Kag/Kur and San/Hiei...
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 17:17 EDT
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okay. interesting chapter. don't quite understand yet why they took souta but i guess we will find out next chapter. update soon. i am very curious now.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 05:33 EDT
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I am very intrigued with this one. You've got an interesting set-up here. I don't think I've ever seen Kuwabara and Botan paired before, but I kind of like it. And you have Hiei and Yukina actually living together to be a "family." Nice. And Kurama is living with them? Ah, but there;s a fourth bedroom, isn't there? ^_^ All I can say, is that you seem to be setting Hiei up as the main guy character in this, with all the thoughts about him, so I am going to keep my fingers crossed that you will be pairing him with Kagome. ^_^ That's my favorite pairing of all-time. But I suppose I will have to wait and see. So,I hope you will get a chance to update this soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 05:45 EDT
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okay now you got me extremely curious about what his father did. unusual pairing between botan and kazuma, i like it though, they do have similar personalities. i am curious though, when do kagome come into the picture and who is she going to be paired with? kurama or hiei? or both? update soon.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: July 03, 2008 19:30 EDT
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Very interesting start. What did his father do? Please update ASAP
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 03:46 EDT
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oh oh oh so intrigued! Need more!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 23:25 EDT
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oh I want to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 17:47 EDT
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update soon. i am curious to happens next.
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 11:01 EDT
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Interesting, Can't wait to see what happens
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