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Reviewed By: Lovewray [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2017 18:49 PST
Comment/Review:
Omg update please
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Reviewed By: Lovewray [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2017 18:49 PST
Comment/Review:
Omg update please
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Reviewed By: yumielen On: February 24, 2009 07:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ update soon. i love it! Italian-->Perfavore aggiorna presto!! Amo questa storia!! Russian-->Pascausta. Mnie nraviza eta istoria!!
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: February 16, 2009 09:43 PST
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love it please update soon
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: January 31, 2009 14:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great. i love it. keep up the good work. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 08:02 PST
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it's a bit ooc but i like it regardless. Nice job!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 16:30 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok you have got to start leaving more clues as to who this man is. I have been trying to figure out who it could be, but none of the kids in Inuyasha's school would give him a hard time like that if it was one of their family members. They would have just killed him. So that rules them out. A woman being killed is new. I just hope that it's not someone in Inuyasha's family. Could you tell us more about Sesshomaru's past. Something he may remember if only little flashes here and there now that he has met Inuyasha's father?
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 14:00 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously cool! An awesome job after being away for sooo long! B reading U!
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Title: O.O (Stupendo!) wonderful
Reviewed By: yumielen_Elena_ On: October 23, 2008 07:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it...Rating 10/10 (-_-...) --------------------------- WOW. I love fanfiction (Sess/Inu). I love your story and i really like third chapter. I'm... very curious, who is the killer? Sessy? (NNNOOO!! And Yes!!!!!...bo) This story is great, pleas update soon!! ^_^ (The suspense is my killing X_X - XD)
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 14:47 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...It's been awhile since U've updated this story, I almost 4got it! Great chapter, but I'm wondering when the 2 are going to take this 2 the next level? U got me on the edge now! I can't wait! B reading U! L8r!
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Reviewed By: Demitria Miriam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, you so inspire me to write my own Inu-Yakuza fic T_T Just wish I didn't have so many other stories on my list to do X_X Damn, I love this fic. I really hope you update again soon!! Wow. I'm... very curious over the killer and if it's Sesshomaru, and if it is him, does he know Inuyasha's family is yakuza? Does he truly have an interest (positive interest, rather) in Inuyasha or is he just using him? Oh god, the suspense! Other than that, I'd only suggest betaing your fic (grammatical errors here and there/ and if English isn't your first language, that's totally understandable). In any case, that's really all that I have to critique on, other than the fact that I love how Sesshou is so teasing of Inuyasha and how innocent Inu is! Ahhh so cute!! Please update as soon as you can! Loved it immensely!! -DM
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Reviewed By: yumielen_Elena_ On: October 19, 2008 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it...Rating 10/10
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Reviewed By: yumielen_Elena_ On: October 11, 2008 12:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz update soon! I love it! ^^
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Reviewed By: Demitria Miriam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2008 08:50 PDT
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I'm loving the originality of this story! Please continue! You're giving me ideas to write fics involving yakuza now too! Great job! I'm anxious to see who's killing off mob family members! *gasp!* -DM
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Reviewed By: yumielen_Elena_ On: July 31, 2008 04:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I really like your story, Can't wait for the next chapter, PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!! PLZ^^(compliments!)
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