| "My Ghost" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Reviewed By: Skifever78 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 18:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm still reading. Sorry for the quick comment but I'm very busy. I'll be checking for updates!
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Title: Whoa! It's been awhile
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: March 25, 2009 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like i said it's been awhile. I've missed some chapters and well at least i had more to read. The reason i haven't been reading your stuff lately is because my Dad is hogging the computer and I'm also writing a novel and that takes up most of my time. The chapters are so captivating I ate them up like nothing else. The secret about the journal has been uncovered. I'm so excited! I'm jumping in my seat! Please update. I love your work.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Skifever78 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter (15). I like how you changed it. Also, it's getting very intense such as when Callie hid the book under the matress along with the knife. I'll be reading!
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Title: 2 Reviews is 1 Day?
Reviewed By: Skifever78 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
2 Reviews in 1 Day? There has to be an excuse and there is one. I'm home sick today :(. But at least it gave me time to read and write a lot :) Anyway, I'm all caught up and chapters 13 and 14 suprised me. I see in your author's notes that you seem to worry if your work is satisfying your readers. Don't worry about it, the story is awesome. Maybe, someday, you could get it published. I buy it and suggest it to all of my friends! What really suprised me was that Ed's journal was a decoy, at least the one they were reading anyway. I hope to see what Ed could have really been writing in the real journal (if there is one). Happy Writing!
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Reviewed By: Skifever78 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 13:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I just read chapter 12 or 13 (but like chapter 8 through 12 or 13) and it was awesome. I haven't read the story in so long and you editting it has been filling up my emails (I have this favorited and I dded you to my favorites). At first, I thought Edward would hav killed Will, but now , like Callie, I realize Ed is too nice and not the type of person to do that so I think Sam did it. But you may be twisting it so there is no way of telling for sure. You never know, it could ave even been Nora! Or maybe it could have been simply Will had been out somewere and someone killed him. Anyway, keep writing. I'll be reading!
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Title: Yay! Just a Random Title
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: January 26, 2009 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! It's been awhile since i read it and i still have a secret crush on a ghost. Something is seriously wrong with me. Anyway the gazebo(sp) scene reminds me of a computer game with ghost (Huh imagine) anyway it was an awesome game called Amber. anyway the gazebo was really creepy and awesome and that was what first came into my mind. So will is being mysterious again. (Squealing like a fan girl) I'm getting too involved but i can't help it. Anyway please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ohne Sie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
To answer your question, there aren't any particular days I update. I update whenever I have a day or two off, am inspired to write, and am not feeling extremely lazy. Yeah.
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Title: Hi! I'm back!
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: December 11, 2008 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey the last two chapters were good i enjoyed the dream about Callie being Nora. and Callie and Ashley passing notes in class. Ashley had a cute moment at lunch. It's too bad that there wasn't alot of Will. I like Will and have a good feeling about him. Anyway please update i want to know what happens. And are there certain days you update so i can keep up. You don't have to tell me just wondering. Please update
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Title: i feel bad
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: October 30, 2008 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if my last comment seemed a little rude I'm truly sorry i didn't know you were moving. (guilty face). I'm glad you are continuing though! I just finished chapter seven and eight. Totally Intense! I had fun with those two. Good job! I enjoyed it! I can't wait for the next chapters. So many unanswered questions. I'm rooting for Will. Team Will. See you next chapter.
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Title: This is awsome!
Reviewed By: Skifever78 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I LOVE this story SOOOOOO much. I hope your move was good and I hope you moved into Will's house :) Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Ohne Sie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 14:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
For those who are wondering, yes, I am going to continue. At the moment, though, I am in the process of moving, which leaves me with no internet access with which to update. So while chapter seven is written, it's on my home computer, which is currently packed up. Hopefully I'll get that chapter up within a week or two. And thanks for the reviews, guys! You're awesome!
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Title: Hey I'm Back!
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: September 14, 2008 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey what up? I've just reviewed your ghost story again and wanted to ask if your going to continue? I really like your writing and your story which is really interesting and cute. I'm thinking i want to read your other stuff too. So i was just wanting to ask if you were continuing with it?
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Title: n_n
Reviewed By: XIShadowxDemonIX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay, new friends~! I wonder what the book is. I bet Will remembers it, however vaguely. Odd that it would come to her in a dream, I bet Angel-kun is right, her room probably has something to do with his death. You update so fast lol, keep it up! ^( n_n)^
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Title: Hey I'm Your new Fan!
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: August 14, 2008 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i like it! Keep it up and I'll try to look out for it. I'm beginning to like Callie cute name by the way. She's doing what I've always wanted to do,what she's doing now. So i kind of relate to this story. So please update soon I'm curious about how he died and that mysterious dream book thing. so please update soon. Snowdeep
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Title: this is the best
Reviewed By: Skifever78 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't to see what happens with the book and I wonder if Ashley and Aaron are really related to Will. Keep writing! =D
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Title: First 2 chapters
Reviewed By: Skifever78 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2008 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I simply just loved the first two chapters. I am going to print out chapters 3 and 4 soon to read over night. Anyways it's all very well written. I rated Origanility 8 because a lot of people do Ghost Stories but not a lot of them are like this. Keep on writing. I'll be reading =D $kife\/er78
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: XIFallenxAngelIX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2008 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Does her room have something to do with his death? You'd think, after waiting so long for contact, and being eager for it,he'd go into her room.... o.o;
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Title: Aw
Reviewed By: XIShadowxDemonIX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Such a proper ghost ^^; If it were me, I'd just pop through walls and spy on people. I mean, if the only place you can see is your home, why not entertain yourself by watching the people who live in it? I can't wait to see how this turns out n_n
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Reviewed By: Kagome8955 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This reminds me of Meg Cabot's The Mediator Seires about a 17 year old mediator who falls in love with a ghost. i'm curious if you will write similar to Meg Cabot's story.
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Title: Squee~
Reviewed By: XIShadowxDemonIX [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 10:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love surprise stories ^^; Er, well I mean I love it when I haven't heard about a story in the makings and one pops up ^^; It sounds like a good story line, so far so good! Can't wait for you to update n_n
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