| "By Demon Law" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this and the originality of it ^^ i commend you for it and i hope you don't loose your muse... lol as i know how hard it is... (thinks about her own stories >_
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really like this and the originality of it ^^ i commend you for it and i hope you don't loose your muse... lol as i know how hard it is... (thinks about her own stories >_
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 16:41 EDT
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i really like this and the originality of it ^^ i commend you for it and i hope you don't loose your muse... lol as i know how hard it is... (thinks about her own stories >_
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 21:31 EDT
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poor kagome, she lost her mom and grandfather on the other side of the well. i am glad that souta made it through to be with her. i can't wait for them to start traveling to the mountain. update soon.
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Reviewed By: moga On: July 15, 2008 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it i cant wait to see what happens next so you should so update soon
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! Go Kags for putting the smack down on the out-cast haters ^_^ i was so happy when she did that -Another one bites the dust! HA! (had to say it, lol) oh, so now it starts to get intresting. Kags going on a raid with 4 thieving demons alone?? And Youko thinks she couldnt purify him cause he's handsome? pssssshh! Wont he be surprised. lol Lovin where this is going, keep up the good work! til next time------ Dessy
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 05:52 EDT
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update soon. i want to know what happens on their way to the cave. youko is as vain as ever. of course he has a reason to be. lol. update soon
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 02:32 EDT
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i love this story. Will i love all of you stoies but this is one of my favs. I do hope that you update again really soon. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: WACHUTU On: July 11, 2008 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it i cant wait to see everyones reaction to kagome returning so please update soon
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Reviewed By: moga On: July 11, 2008 22:11 EDT
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i love your story and cant wait to read your next chapter so please update soon
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 04:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARG please update again I want more thank you.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 02:32 EDT
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ahh come on. you left a cliffy no fair. i can't wait for the pups reaction to their mother's pelt. i also can't wait to read the reaction of youko when he sees kagome with the pelt. update soon. i want to read some please. kagome also had a soft spot for pups. especially kitsunes pups. it suckes that she lost shippo though.
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune (im not loged in) On: July 10, 2008 21:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this is really good! the pups (all of them) are so cute! It really suits Kagome to be the type that takes in all those kits and pups, she's such a good mother. It's sad that she lost poor Shippou though, DAMN THAT NARAKU! KILL! lol cant wait to see how she meets Youko and the others and just how that turns out. ha ha, Yomi and Hiei (at least i'm pretty sure it was those two) dont think ningin women are worth much- she'll show them! you've got a new reviewer! keep it up! -Dessy
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 05:37 EDT
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okay you have to update this story soon. i want to know what happens after sesshomaru adopts kagome and her reaction to youko and kuronue. i also want to know what happens when she takes all of the children home and runs into kurama and hiei in the future. update soon
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 02:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad about what happened to the others, espeicially Shippo. Just like Kagome to take in a group of kitsune-pups, Shiori-chan, and two forbiddens. can't wait to see whats gonna happen when Youko, Hiei etc find out the 'weak ningen' is a miko adopted by Sesshomaru but took in all those kids. drama, humor- both? hope to see a new chapter soon, really like this story. -DuskenDreamer
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