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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 06:12 CST
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Congratulations Sharibet-your story "In Pursuit of the Green Dragon" has been nominated for Best Crossover at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! wbk
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! That was the perfect way to end it: set the Elrics up on another adventure and give Souta his happy ending! Brilliant! I enjoyed this story sooooo much! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! What a sweet ending. I wouldn't have minded the outcome either way but I'm really happy that this wound up being InuYasha and Kagome. And that the Elric brothers finally found their way home! I'm sure theres loads of people they'll want to see there and maybe Alphonse can find someone who returns his feelings like Kagome wished. I'm so glad to have stuck with this till the end and will be looking forward to the epilogue! Congrats on the completion! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 04:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! Kikyou's farewell was so sad but done beautifully. I wonder what'll happen when they all try going through the well again. Hopefully no one gets stuck! Loved the chapter, as always. :D ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh...seems like everythings wrapping up! But theres still Ed and Al who need to get home, a love triangle to be figured out, and Uncle Souta to save! And I'm wondering if Kikyou really was "just asking". Hmmmmmm...*waggles eyebrows* I can't wait! Great chapter, as always. The part where Ed sympathises with Kohaku was REALLY, really good! And the tatoo, creative. Until next chapter! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2008 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet :) Squishy moments between Inu and Kag! But now what does that mean for Alphonse (aside from some more competition, lol)? And will Inu ever find out about their kiss? As for the rest of the chapter...I like how Kikyou and Kohaku are coming into the picture. And how Kohaku feels that he should die. If they ever do wind up completing the jewel I wonder who will come to own it and what the unselfish wish will be. Haha, it seems like Ed doesn't like being left out. It was funny how he kinda assumed the role of InuYasha in this chap (what with his wanting to keep moving along and then demanding that they leave the village first thing in the morning). I wonder how their snake-in-a-box(lulz) trick will work, too. I feel like everything is coming to a head and LOVED that this didn't just end at 'BOOM! Envy's dead, lets go home.' As usual, I can't wait for the next installment to this fic. Glad to see it updated! And how was Japan? ~Amber :D
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 14:47 CDT
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Oh dear heaven, you won't believe this! I've been reading your fic for a while, even pushing my friend Kat Morning towards it, and all the while, I didn't realise it was you! Then, I saw your author's note saying you were in Japan, remembered the mail about you landing in Narita on your mail-list, and blinked at your nickname *laughs* I never thought to check whether it was MY Sharibet who was tinkering around with both my old and new fandoms. :3 If you're interested, when you come back from Japan (with pocky!) I have an all-FMA present for you! I'm still firmly an Inuyasha person, but FMA just has such a wonderful plot that I was sucked in. ^v^ I'm so glad to get an excuse to come annoy you again! *hugsquish* Enjoy your stay in Japan to the full! -- Midi
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Poor uncle Souta! But...this chapter has me curious on a lot. Like the well, Envy, the fate of the brothers.. You are too good, woman! The suspense! I hope you enjoy Japan! I'm sure I'll still be teetering here on the edge of my seat waiting for what is sure to be an interesting next chapter by the time you get back! Till then, lol! :D ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! The chase was really exciting and I'm happy to see that the Inu-tachi and co have finally arrived on the scene! Now let's hope that Uncle Sota didn't just kill them all with that very Roy-esque move he pulled at the end -__- Oh! And I see you got nominated for Best Crossover at the IYFG awards! Congratulations! I'm deff gonna try and second it come the 14th! Great chapter, good luck, and until next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...GOD! Best chapter yet! Kagome reaaallly pulled her own in this one and it was cool to see the girl power. Plus, Kouga didn't die! And the inu-gang arrived at the castle! Can't wait till the next chapter! Great job on this one :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I'm reading this and thinking "Yes! An update!" then by the end I'm like "Nooo...Kouga!" Awesome chapter! But I take it this is where the evil-ness begins? And, oddly...I'm looking forward to it ;) Till next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Some Ed-Inu comic relief, Kouga showing up, and a taste of a little action scene at the end...made for one great chapter! Nice! And Uncle Souta is learning flame alchemy? VERY cool. I love the subtle similarities between him and Roy. It's a lot like whats done in canon between Kag and Kik. Loved the update. Till next chapter ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 23:58 CDT
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>=] . . . still think the metal bikini... chains. *shakes head up and down* . . she's back!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so you aren't making this easy for her. Good thing Kagome's clever. I would've thought her only plans would be made towards escaping, but reclaiming the jewel fragments that Kikyou gave to Naraku is just brilliant. I wonder how Envy'll react when he finds out that Al really isn't dead...AND how Kaggie plans to sneak/fight her way past a bunch of demons, a shapeshifting dragon, climb down a mountain, and return to her friends all in one piece. Again...NOT easy. Not easy at all. Loved the chapter! Till next update ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, very cool. Uncle Souta is learning alchemy! Hopefully they're not doing anything that'll mess up the jewel, though. That could cause some problems in the future. Can't wait to see what'll happen when/if Sesshomaru comes into the picture. And Naraku of course. Any chance they'll run into Kouga? Oh! And then theres Kaggie who still needs to be rescued/rescue herself. Loved the chapter! Till next update! ~Amber
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