| "Finding Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2009 16:43 CST
Comment/Review:
INUYASHAxKAGOME kagome was so in love with inu that cant change to falling in love in someone else so fast what about she finds out she still loves inuyasha but trys to stay with his brother in hopes of getting over inuyasha all together and fear of being hurt again and again :her and inu kiss on a new moon the spring or kagomes time at thats how she found out she loves him still
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Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why do it as both InuYasha and Sesshomaru mating Kagome and have them admit there love for her.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... interesting turn of events... what will happen now... still like the inuyasha/kagome pairing though... hope inuyasha & sesshoumaru act more brotherly... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! But I like Inu/Kag stories. Sessh/Kag stories are unrealistic. Sesshoumaru will end up with a female demon after all he hates all humans except rin. He would want to keep his bloodline pure. That means he would never mate a human because they would have hanyou children and we all know what he thinks of hanyou's. And there is no way in hell he'd change his mind.
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Title: omg i luv teh ending
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 17:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
drama
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... seems that kagome has become a powerful miko... nice that she is helping sesshoumaru & rin and inuyasha... hope they find a way to get the curse off rin... still like the inuyasha/kagome pairing though... but it would be good if she helped in getting sesshoumaru & inuyasha act more like brothers though... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: youkailover1
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so far its pretty good but make sure you don't get caught up in too many odd facts, details or tangents because they can lengthen a story and make it hard to read. If Kagome has finally decided that the Inuyasha/Kikyo thing is too much and has left to make a new life then thats what you need to stick with. She should still be able to meet her friends though and have Shippo with her since he is like her adopted son. Inuyasha needs to grow up and since its unlikely that through the entire manga and anime he never really did that I would stick with that and let him move on to someone else. I personally love the Kagome Sesshomaru storyline and its a great way to give Sess some life and heart since he didn't have that in the series. Rin is a great way to connect the two but if Kags just came off the loving Inuyasha thing then it should take alittle time falling in love with Sess. You have the makings of a good story so long as you don't bog it down too much with added junk. Good luck and I look forward to see what you come up with next!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love your fanficXD this side of kagome is just so loveableXP lol i cant wait for the next chapter=D post it soon pleaseXD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... will this be an inuyasha/kagome pairing?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: waaah y 10 reviews, reviews are verry rare and it takes for ever waaah i want to no what happens to rin!!!
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 10:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
i luved the hole sesshy (SORT OF) obeying Kagome thing hehe.........i am sad that rin is hurt
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Title: youkailover1
Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more. I like the way you have separated Kagome and given her greater powers, she was always kinda weak in the anime portrayal of her powers. A bow and arrow aren't nearly as cool as glowing pink hands and hair flying around her. :) Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha-Kagome-12 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 03:56 CDT
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Good! I love it you soo need to continue I am curious as to what is going to happen and when the rest of the inu gang are going to join!
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 20:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
write another chapter huurrrrryyyy
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
your fanfics really good=D i really like the story line...its really interesting=D cant wait for the next chapter
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Title: wow this is is great wonderful please continue
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is amazing please continue! andif you wouldn't mind would you read and review my story's i know they aren't that good but i was hoping if they are you could help me i mean your story it just blew me away!
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