| "Mr. Perfect, for your eyes only" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dun dun dun! I wonder how he'll answer that?!? anyway it was a good chap! UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT'LL HAPPENE!
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!!! that is SOO not fair!! Please update soon!! haha. i can't stand thinking what inuyasha is gonna say to that!! but, it's wierd because he just asked her if she would wait for him to explain his past and then she just threw that question on him. I mean it's not something you just ask during dinner "oh hey how was your day? did you kill someone 7 years ago?" it doesn't really slip off the tounge. haha. so, please update soon!! great chapter!! I think miroku is SOOO funny "what is that on your lips? a smile?" hahahaha!! that's hilarious!! :D great chapter! can't wait til the next one!!
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 13:51 CDT
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Aw, poor Inu, Kags got him with that out of left field on a bad day. The story is progressing nicely, unlike their relationship! I hope you get a chance to update before your trip because you left a heck of a cliffhanger! "I know we haven't even gone beyond a friendly HANDSHAKE, but btw, before I fall for your charms, are you a murderer?" So please update soon! And don't be sad about the last year of school, be excited about all the crazy and exciting things that will happen! Its better to focus on that, rather than the sadder 'end of an era' part.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that inuyasha & kagome are getting along... interesting that sango got a job in sesshoumaru & inuyasha's company... what will inuyasha's reaction be to kagome's question... what will happen now... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: o my gosh!
Reviewed By: Inukag-mirosan lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 17:28 CDT
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I'm sorry that i'm reviewing about the first chapter only right now, but i'll read the next three and then review on them!! I've been away on a trip but i got back and i had to read this story!! I loved the first chapter!! ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!! i thought it was hilarious when hojo, like, followed her to the bar!!! but, i loved it when inuyasha saved her!! she wished he were her boyfriend! haha. now, i'll read the next three chapters and review on them!!
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Reviewed By: pretty_princess_2k6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgot to say..>.>..Please update soon!!!
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Title: =O
Reviewed By: pretty_princess_2k6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
New story!!! Love it! .
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo Inuyasha still hung up about Kikyo?? hmmm i wonder if Inuyasha founds out, that he might use Kagome to tell the world his story XD oki oki anyways Kagomes got alot of work to break Inuyasha then :P
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice new chap! man poor Inu, he's still like REALLY hung up over Kikiyo. anywya it was good. UPDATE SOON!!! and i know what u mean Twilight is AWESOME! i can't wait for the movie!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha's pain is deep... and kagome is determined to find out his secret... seems that inuyasha hates people like kagome... looks like the end results aren't going to be good... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Hmmmm i think this new chapy was sorta crappy id been funny if it turned out sesshomaru was kagome's ex boyfriend!!! Readers would love that Inuyasha could get really jelouse but hide it and kagome could be all shocked!
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 21:28 CDT
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if use that i sugest that u delete this coment for surprise reasons
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Title: AWSOME1!!!!!!! I WANT MORE DAMN IT WRITE WRITE WRITE LIKE UR LIFE DEPENDS ON IT !!!!!!
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 02:04 CDT
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MWAHAHAHA MAY BE IT DOES LOL NO IT DOESN'T
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 21:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
good
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow Inuyasha a murder?? hmmm... Kagome must be his girlfriend!! i wanna know more about him :P
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Reviewed By: 2qt4uboi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 12:53 CDT
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Perfect! I love this! I really want to be a jouranlist and this is a funny look at what their world might be like! I love the concept! If you ask me I think its going to be great!
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