| "Time Heals All Wounds" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 02:59 CDT
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woot! bah ha ha ha! poor Souten and Shiori they are going to be spending a little more quality time together than they would like. Good thing they both love sgetti and meatballs lol good job
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY nice. I'm definetely putting this on my favorites. And if you still need a beta reader you can email me and we'll talk details. Can't wait till your next update! I just LOVED how you picked Souten. Most people would go for Shippou or put in an OC, so the choice was definetly a different one. The rivalry between InuYasha's daughter and Kagome's is great too. It makes things just that more interesting if their parents decide to pursue a relationship. I only really have one thing I'm confused about. Rin strips? If she's Sesshomaru's mate I really don't see him letting her do that. Oh well...I enjoy your story! Update soon ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo wow :P ill be reading more when ya bring more chapters out ^______^
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 23:59 CDT
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Interesting so far, keep it up 8D by the way; in the anime/manga Shiori's father is called 'Tsukyoumaru' and if you want to know just for random facts.. the 'bat tribe' is called 'Hyakki' I believe....
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: August 03, 2008 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so far great job and am looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that their kids don't get along... but at least they met already... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 16:05 CDT
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I'm confused , wouldnt shipo fit better as kags kid, does he come into the story at all ?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... looking forward to the upcoming chapters... seems to deal with lots of drama & action... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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