| "Time Heals All Wounds" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: December 18, 2008 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry to read about what has happend so far. it is funny as hell. They do sale better apple in a spray that you can spray on the impornant things. By the way I do agrey with Inuyasha. Happy Holidays. Feel better soon the story is good great.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 16:26 CDT
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Nice chapter! Hiten is even more of an ass than I thought, if that's possible! I can't believe Kikyo thinks Inuyasha owes her anything but she is very shallow and self-absorbed! LOL Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome
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Reviewed By: inu-babe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an awsome story so far,you have to keep updating as soon as you can. great job!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha and kagome keep meeting and get along quite fine... wonder what happens on their date... and shiori kinda likes kagome for her daddy... how will souten take the news kagome will tell her about her date with inuyasha and she has to stay over at shiori's place... they do have the same favorite food... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 22:59 CDT
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That was really good!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww..poor Hiten gets NO love. Not that he deserves it, but still. It'll be funny to hear Souten tell her mother exactly why she thinks her father is a bastard and her reaction to the news that she'll be spending a day with her worst nemesis. Also, Kaede going super nanny on the both of them. And Yash stutters! Double awwwww....till next chappie! Update when you can :) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 02:59 CDT
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woot! bah ha ha ha! poor Souten and Shiori they are going to be spending a little more quality time together than they would like. Good thing they both love sgetti and meatballs lol good job
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY nice. I'm definetely putting this on my favorites. And if you still need a beta reader you can email me and we'll talk details. Can't wait till your next update! I just LOVED how you picked Souten. Most people would go for Shippou or put in an OC, so the choice was definetly a different one. The rivalry between InuYasha's daughter and Kagome's is great too. It makes things just that more interesting if their parents decide to pursue a relationship. I only really have one thing I'm confused about. Rin strips? If she's Sesshomaru's mate I really don't see him letting her do that. Oh well...I enjoy your story! Update soon ;) ~Amber
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo wow :P ill be reading more when ya bring more chapters out ^______^
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 23:59 CDT
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Interesting so far, keep it up 8D by the way; in the anime/manga Shiori's father is called 'Tsukyoumaru' and if you want to know just for random facts.. the 'bat tribe' is called 'Hyakki' I believe....
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: August 03, 2008 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it so far great job and am looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that their kids don't get along... but at least they met already... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 16:05 CDT
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I'm confused , wouldnt shipo fit better as kags kid, does he come into the story at all ?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... looking forward to the upcoming chapters... seems to deal with lots of drama & action... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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