Reviewed By: OptiMoose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That's a really nice and original story, but it would win if you'd have someone let you help with grammar and such things.
Other than that, it's really great. And your friend wrote a great poem. |
