Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 02:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I thought I'd check out this fic because you said you were new to writing. It wasn't a bad idea for a story (a good plot in the making in my opinion), but I think it could still use a little polishing. My advice: Keep going, keep writing. If you really love doing it, keep going back and re-reading and do your best to make it better each time. You get better the more you write, so if you really love it I'm sure you can be one of the best writers on here soon. Like I said just go back and re-read as much as you can and see if you can improve it. That's what I usually do, and let me tell you, each time I find a new mistake ;). Oh and please lose the pink, if it's bright like that, it seems to me to draw people away, though I know it looks awesome ^_^.
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