Title: Comment virginity is officially mine
Reviewed By: Yami396 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2008 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was wondering when you were going to post these. Ah, what more can I say besides amazing. I love the balance between emotion, the slight wise-cracks mixed in with the darker aspects of the fic. Everything is just so raw (even though I said that already) and exposed, and Demyx's grief is too real for comment. Nothing about this is contrite or false. It's a masterpiece of the untold stories that happened during the timeout of the game.
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