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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the new chapter! Oh I would kill to see InuYasha and Sesshomaru in those nice tight fitting clothes lol. But I really liked this chapter a lot and cant wait to read the next to read about the different type of fighting Kagome had mentioned lol keep up the great work ^_^
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Reviewed By: youkailover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha. Love the humor between the brothers Inu Taisho. I'm excited to see where you go with this story, its good so far. I like that Kags has alittle something for Sess and am wondering if you will be making this a Kags/Sess pairing or Inu/Kags pairing? I like the idea of Sess and Inu getting to know the world 500 years after their time, lots of opportunity for humor and laughs. Can't wait for more!Good job so far!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about being REALLY (I think the term might be "Anal"...) about this, but no one, (except for a non professional) woulde recomend as first aid to remove an "immbedded object" from a wound, due to the fact that the item usually helps keep the blood inside of the body (blocking) and it could cause even more damage trying to take it out (ie ripping muscle, leaving bits inside by accident...) actually they would probably recommend that you tie up a triangular bandage around the entry and exit points to try and stop any bleeding that is occurring. they would never recommend trying to cut the object cause that may cause the object to cause further damage due to the person being knowledgeable about how to cut it... If it came down to it they might cut the ends off and then bring the person to the hospital... but the ambulance, and the other emergence services would be doing it, because the think that would kill the person would be loss of blood, infection would be a secondary concern. (*SORRY SORRY SORRY!!!!*)
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaa!! I lovve the new chapter Kagome getting a little to comfortable with fluffy lol. I cant wait to read more on how InuYasha and Sesshomaru are even gonna be able to deal with each other for a year its gonna be fun I can tell lol. Keep up the great work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, is our little Kagome getting the hots for our Fluffy...mmmmmmmmmmmm!!! LOL As you can tell I love chapter 3 can't wait till chapter.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 14:46 CDT
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quite interesting beginning. so she shoots herself huh? ♠ i will be looking forward to reading more. ♦ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: MorphinexRomance [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a delightful story! Interesting how it's sessh kag and inu hmmm interesting lemons to come, makes my mouth water lol
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm "LOVIN" this story. This is one I will really follow. Please update soon.;)
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Reviewed By: LusterBlossom [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG youre an awesome writer! n____n I sense a love triangle between sesshy, Kagome, and Inu! I can feel it! This story is amazing so far and update soon! Some of the stories died at the last or 2nd chapter so dedicate your soul to this one and complete it!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay first comment lol.Anyways I really like this story so far. It caught my attention and I wanted to keep reading it was really good! I really hope you update soon so I can read what happens next ^_^.
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