| "Not So Young Anymore" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sakura Maxwell-Minamino On: September 09, 2008 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey are you going to update this here too. AFF has like 6 or 7 chappies. Please update here too. AFF can be a hasle. They are such dicks about things. Please update this. I wanna read the next chappie and I can't access it on AFF!!!!! **cries** I wanna know whats happening?!?!?!?!?!?!!!! Onegai??? Ja matte ne Sakura Maxwell-Minamino SSAC(Sakura Sinopa Ariyana-Chang
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 03:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
++++++++++ ++++oh pl++eas+e +up+da+tye+ so+o+n++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 03:39 EDT
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'Hiei's abnormally large eyes widened further.' Haha, that's so cute. Chibi-Hiei will prevail in his quest for his flame! *punches the air in glee*
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Reviewed By: Kazukano On: August 24, 2008 16:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, im SO loving it right now. im wondering if the pairing might be hiei/kagome? mainly cos im so in love with that pair. please update soon
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 00:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Love it, write more soon. I wanna know hat happens
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i gave you a nine only because i'veseen two other fics with her meeting hiei as a child but other than that it was amazing... please write more.
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 03:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Right after I left a review for the last chapter, I searched up on aff.net and found your story. It was like getting the landing on the 'Free Parking' square in Monopoly and getting all that cash. Oh soooo sweet! But, just because I found and read the chapters on there doesn't mean I won't review on here when you post a new chapter! About the newest update, no worries about me 'blowing chunks' when I had reached the fish part. Just think of it as extreme sushi :)
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Reviewed By: Yabun [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww! *heart melts* Chibi!Hiei is so adorable, especially when you can clearly see his older self super-imposed over him. He needs the motherly love that pratically spills out of Kagome. I had a goofy smile once I got to Hiei's part, and it stayed on 'til the very end of the chapter. Wait, I lied. It's still on and it refuses to go away. This is definately a story I'll be checking every day for updates, even if I don't expect them (But I can hope!).
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Reviewed By: fhfh^ On: August 11, 2008 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fanfic! I know you don't have that many reviews right now, but if you keep updating you'll get more reviews. I promise.^^ I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like how you started it and I;m interested to see what happens next.
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