| "The Time Will Come" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: raska [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 09:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story so far! i loved the ritual and their reactions. can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: September 15, 2002 20:50 CDT
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i like your story! the whole vegeta/bulma reaction thing was cute too! |
Reviewed By: Sailor_Jeniss [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2002 18:26 CDT
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neeeed.....mooooooooooore, thats really weird....i usually don't like V/B fics.... |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 01:03 CDT
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I can totally see this! I love your idea of the saiya-jin mating ritual, well sort of, it wasn't the ceremony! Their reactions cracked me up. Did the ritual hurt, or did they both have a high pain tolerance because their strong? Huh Huh!? Well alteast update fast! |
Reviewed By: unknown22 On: July 26, 2002 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good so far..cant wait to see what happens next..keep it up! update asap |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 12:39 CDT
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This was great you wote everyone to the 'T'. Hurry with the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Niomea On: July 26, 2002 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is such a cool story. You should really keep it up. But who would you say Bulma sounds like? |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 08:59 CDT
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Oh wow! This was great! I love the detail you put into this chapter. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 11:05 CDT
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This was great! What happens at the ball!? |
Reviewed By: Lean On: July 18, 2002 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE your story so far so keep going please oh please oh please. PLEASE with Vegeta on top? |
Reviewed By: Sam On: July 17, 2002 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it;). Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 13:04 CDT
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This was great! How will the ball go? |
Reviewed By: Cate On: July 14, 2002 14:39 CDT
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Cool Fanfic save to Fav. Love it please update soon |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 12:43 CDT
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This was great! It's good to see a fic where's Vegeta is born and his mother is still alive, most fics like that just kill the mood! -.- But this was cool! Update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 21:40 CDT
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Yay! This was great are you going to go a few years ahead in the future? |
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