| "Smile Because It Happened" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: Disappointed
Reviewed By: Zutara11 On: October 13, 2011 14:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was great before. But we all know that Katara and Zuko don't act like they did in chapter 27. I was hoping for this scene to be more romantic, and not filled with so many dirty comments. The fact that they kept cursing and teasing each other like they did was just unnecessary and untrue to the characters. Also, this chapter didn't flow as well as your other chapters. This scene was what I was looking forward to most, and I'm just disappointed. |
Title: OMG
Reviewed By: ZutaraForever11 On: October 05, 2011 18:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is so well written! Also, you kept the personalities of all the characters. When I'm reading this, I can see the animation in my head. I also really admire that you made a whole story, and continued it. Most fan fictions I've read write a few chapters then just leave their story hanging. This is the best zutara story ever written! The jokes are really good, and the scenes with Zuko and Katara are beyond words. You should send this to the creators of Avatar so they can make it a mini side series for zutara fans! Enough said, you are an amazing writer! Thank you so much for writing this! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 12 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 13:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the epilogue it was great. You are a great author. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 29 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 13:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 28 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 13:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 27 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 13:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 26 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 25 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 24 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 23 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 12:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 22 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 12:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 21 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 20 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2011 12:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great. |
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