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| "A Balm for Social Failure" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 13, 2009 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel another plot twist coming. I want to know whats happends! So many things are building up and its making me ansy, despite the fact that im sick -_- sorry about any spelling errors, Im too lazy and ill to bother with it, heres waiting for the next chapter!
| Title: Sleepy
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: April 07, 2009 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate Misa. ...I hope L catches her. Lol :p I'm ashamed to admit that that was part of the reason I watched DeathNote all the way through. (to see if she died :p) I found her to be a very annoying character, Matsuda is too but in a funny-stupid kind of way, I keep picturing him with pompoms and a skirt cheering the investigation on *giggles hysterically*. Charming as always, I can't wait to see what happends next! Till then ~Passing Reader
| Reviewed By: An. On: April 06, 2009 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Coming along nicely. Love the Light/L interaction, it's so loaded with double meanings and implications. Sorry to hear about the re-writing hell. This chapter was awesome, as per usual, even if you say it's not as good as it was. I love your wit and style. So much fun to read. Impatient for more!
| Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2009 23:58 CDT
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Oh wow, didn't know you had an account on FF.net! That's generally where I do my writing...personally, I feel that this site doesn't show enough love for us writers...probably because everyone is over on FF.net! MM.org seriously needs to consider adding a button to reply to reviews like on the other site. But anyways, this should be a review about your story, not about the website it's on! First and foremost, I can't believe L slapped Light! I tried to imagine L being so furious as to do something like that...just when I have the image, it disappears, lol! I think of L more as a person to fight with wits and words, but as you had said, him doing such a thing has sickened him. A second thing I noted...I learn new words from you! What a colorful vocabulary! And lastly, it'll be sweet when or if L and Light actually admit that they have feelings for each other point-blank. I like that there's something more to this than just smut. Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
| Title: ,,,It's dark...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 31, 2009 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm pretty sure I've reviewed before, but between work, college, family, and the new puppy that appears to be insomniac and likes to howl at the moon, I did not have much time to go through all the stories I usually read. That, and the fact that all the stories are saved on my old computer forcing me to go and manually hunt these down ^^' To the point of my review: Your brilliance knows no bounds! I have no idea how you do it, but don't stop lol! This story is and will always be one of my favorites. It's one of the most well written fics I've read and, if you have not already considered becoming a writer, you should defiantly think about it. I am of the firm opinion that Death Note is one of the hardest manga/anime to write a fic about. The characters are so complex that if one were to put them in an alternate universe it would be almost impossible to write. You manage to keep these characters in character whilst bending them to your will. It's amazing to read! What's more impressive is that you make both Light and L the intelligent geniuses that they are. Not many people are able to accomplish that and most end up sounding stupid. I don't believe this fic could have been better written. Managing to keep them rivals and enemies while building a convincing relationship between them...pure un-adult rated (or should I say adult rated? *wink*) genius! If you don't become an author, I implore you to keep writing if only to sate this poor reader's need for brilliant fan fiction. Selfish I know, but I'm going to take a page out of Light's book and want it all.*laughs* I can't wait for the next chapter, but at the same time I don't want the stories end to come any closer so that I may bask in your virtuosity. I dunno what I want but I want it! Ugh! ~Passing Reader
| Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 02:14 CDT
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You know, for a moment there, starting with your previous chapter, I thought that Ryuk would develop some kind of feelings for Rem (Nothing more than feelings!! Shinigami can't reproduce anyways...thankfully!). But reading this chapter in particular, naw. Ryuk can be a bit of a bastard when it comes down to other people's feelings (bitterly, I had thought that though he's a shinigami, how much different is he from real men?). Anyways, you really are keeping us on the edge of our seats with all the twists and turns. I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter, you're an excellent writer! (But why the heck do I always end up reading your chapters at like, two in the morning?! lol!).
| Reviewed By: Addicted. On: March 15, 2009 13:45 CDT
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My dear, I think I love you. I've read my fair share of fanfiction, and I must say that this story of yours is one of the most well-written, creative, endearing, and believable (at least as far as the voices of the characters go) I have seen out there. I love the direction you've taken Light and L's (and Kira's) relationship in, and while I know you said no one would die, I'm really quite restless and I can't wait to find out how this mess is resolved. Kudos on a brilliant story, keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 20:14 CST
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Wow, you really have this characterization thing down to a point, don't you? I'm jealous! Tomorrow, I'll be posting the closest thing to yaoi for Light's birthday (February 28th) and your story is helping me with my own plot bunnies! Also, a GaaraxNaruto (and maybe Sasuke?) story was in the making, but no telling when if ever I'll get to that. Anywho, another lovely chapter. I'm liking the schizo Light and Kira thing!
| Title: Latest Chapter
Reviewed By: Nicolaus On: February 17, 2009 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I have thoroughly enjoyed this entire fantic, except for this last chapter...not that I think it was a completely bad chapter, but...Light cross-dressing? Why couldn't they just leave Japan? And what exactly has changed in their relationship? there were some unexplained changes in the way they interacted and treated each other, like why they hide behind childish banter instead of facing their issues with trust and power-struggles. Perhaps some explanation is yet to come, but this chapter seemed a bit unfinished and a little...careless. Don't get me wrong, I still LOVE this story and will read it to the end and I think you are a GREAT writer, I just personally think that just this chapter is below your "usual".
| Reviewed By: Zee-sama On: February 17, 2009 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naya! Write more. Your going to kill me with the saspence.... @_______@
| Reviewed By: Raven_cas On: February 15, 2009 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaahhhhhhh i was sooo woried that L had found some one new i love your story, everytime i tern one my computer your story is the first thing i go to. you in spired me to start writing a book
| Title: Phenomenal...
Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I've been reading this story for the past month now and I just have to say that you're doing a damn good job on this!! I love how you keep everyone in person, and yet, it's kinda like we get a glimpse of who they are behind the scenes. Like just how much L loves his sweets...the chapter mentioning L mentally chastising Matsuda for ruining his muffin breakfast had me rolling! And for this chapter here, I'm so happy that you kept Light alive...a piece of me said that since the execution wasn't made public, that he might still be alive, but I dismissed it...and then, you really did keep him!! Thank you! And the smut between the two...whoot! ^_^ Kinda made me want to do my own yaoi story...I actually have part of the first chapter, but since I'm a comedy writer, I'm not sure if this attempt at seriousness will work...but that's all besides the point. The...is...EPIC!! Great going, I applaud you 100 percent! (Oh, and sorry for this extremely long review...but hey, what writer doesn't like long reviews? ^_^).
| Title: cool
Reviewed By: iammecya On: February 13, 2009 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy this story very much, thanks for writing it :)
| Reviewed By: Meghz On: January 13, 2009 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowowowowowowowowow this was worth the wait! Obviously. I can't seem to find flaws in this, even if I try. Which I don't. This is amazingly fun to read, and I'm very excited for the next chapter! :)
| Title: Evil DeathNotePornz Laugh
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: January 05, 2009 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Muahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!! ...Yes, that is all I have to say.... >:)
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