| "A Balm for Social Failure" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Title: Latest Chapter
Reviewed By: Nicolaus On: February 17, 2009 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I have thoroughly enjoyed this entire fantic, except for this last chapter...not that I think it was a completely bad chapter, but...Light cross-dressing? Why couldn't they just leave Japan? And what exactly has changed in their relationship? there were some unexplained changes in the way they interacted and treated each other, like why they hide behind childish banter instead of facing their issues with trust and power-struggles. Perhaps some explanation is yet to come, but this chapter seemed a bit unfinished and a little...careless. Don't get me wrong, I still LOVE this story and will read it to the end and I think you are a GREAT writer, I just personally think that just this chapter is below your "usual".
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Reviewed By: Zee-sama On: February 17, 2009 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naya! Write more. Your going to kill me with the saspence.... @_______@
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Reviewed By: Raven_cas On: February 15, 2009 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaahhhhhhh i was sooo woried that L had found some one new i love your story, everytime i tern one my computer your story is the first thing i go to. you in spired me to start writing a book
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Title: Phenomenal...
Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I've been reading this story for the past month now and I just have to say that you're doing a damn good job on this!! I love how you keep everyone in person, and yet, it's kinda like we get a glimpse of who they are behind the scenes. Like just how much L loves his sweets...the chapter mentioning L mentally chastising Matsuda for ruining his muffin breakfast had me rolling! And for this chapter here, I'm so happy that you kept Light alive...a piece of me said that since the execution wasn't made public, that he might still be alive, but I dismissed it...and then, you really did keep him!! Thank you! And the smut between the two...whoot! ^_^ Kinda made me want to do my own yaoi story...I actually have part of the first chapter, but since I'm a comedy writer, I'm not sure if this attempt at seriousness will work...but that's all besides the point. The...is...EPIC!! Great going, I applaud you 100 percent! (Oh, and sorry for this extremely long review...but hey, what writer doesn't like long reviews? ^_^).
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: iammecya On: February 13, 2009 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy this story very much, thanks for writing it :)
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Reviewed By: Meghz On: January 13, 2009 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowowowowowowowowow this was worth the wait! Obviously. I can't seem to find flaws in this, even if I try. Which I don't. This is amazingly fun to read, and I'm very excited for the next chapter! :)
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Title: Evil DeathNotePornz Laugh
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: January 05, 2009 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Muahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!! ...Yes, that is all I have to say.... >:)
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Title: http://www.fanfiction.net/~hwoarangswife
Reviewed By: Thelly On: November 10, 2008 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear missy, You have written one of the most enthralling and utterly entrancing death note fanfictions that I have ever had the privilege of reading. This story is so good....I'm actually unable to formulate any other word than "Wow". It has blown me away. Let me just say that you have done an excellent job. The characters are completely in-character. L being the shrewd, vulnerable, and quirky smart-ass we all know and love. And Light being that smug,arrogant, yet sexy ass beast we know he is. honestly, this is the death note fic I've been waiting for!!!! I've read so many good ones...but this...this is a gold egg you have here! see, I always wanted to read a death note fanfic in which it L was completely overwhelemed with Light, A story in which Light is extremely sexy, and pursuing L with a predatory intent. I wanted to see Light really seduce L, and this story is really the answer to my craving. I can thank you enought for this. This a truly wonderful piece you have written If I had an account here, you would be my first favorite author, because this is greatness. I want you to know that If nobody else lets you know how much they appreciate this I will. It will dishearten me if you abandoned such a great story. I'm looking forward to what happens next. I basically died during the tub scene. Light was too much, so was L with his damn moaning! I guess what I'm trying to say is "keep making your fans die a sweet death with this awesome fanfic!" Cause its good....in a bad way good! lol Lots o love and mind fruits to power the plot ~Thelly~ p.s. sorry if I freaked you out, I get carried away when it comes to either yaoi, or good yaoi fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a fantastic way of writing. You stick to the charactor's personalities but twist them enough to make this an awsome fic!! I can't wait to read the next chapters! That and this is the best f*****g DN porn EVER!!!
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Title: I Can Never Look at Bathrooms the same way...lol
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: November 03, 2008 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I just about died laughing. I guess L finally got his bathroom scene lol! I actually half expected L to start looking up gay pornz sites for research tehee! Now all you need is a scene with Light ans L in a comprimising position under a table as Mr. Yagami walks in *snicker* A great and fun read as always. Perfectly played out and beautifully written. I love how each character fights one another, but ultimetly succumes in order to move forward. I look forward to the next chapter as always, so until then, ja~
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Reviewed By: just readin' On: November 02, 2008 20:19 CST
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i'm not normally a fan of yaoi...but you hooked me on this one. wow. sexy as hell, and great humor and verbal sparring. this is so much fun to read. can't wait to see what turn you decide to take on this.
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Title: Go L!!!! XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 26, 2008 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Im quite happy with the turn of events. :D Its kinda nice that L got some of his own back at Light's father. Making him practically beg to be in close proxsimity to his son. Im sorry for any spelling errors in my review and if it seems rushed. Gotta go to work ^^' But I still wanted to show my gratitude. Cunning as always, can wait for the next chapter! Until then~ ;p
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Reviewed By: Romea On: October 19, 2008 23:04 CDT
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I love Light! And L! No hate points for Light. Yagami-san is just a worried parent but he's also closed minded if he's against gayness so much. I don't not like him though because getting Light and L together would be no problem without him and then where would the story be? I think this chapter was just a little boring because the story didn't seem to advance very much, other than the cameras, but maybe I just need to impatiently wait for the next update to get it. Thanks for such an amazing story, btw!!
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Title: Hmmm....
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 18, 2008 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still have to say that Light's father fustrates me the most, though not as much in this chapter. Im suprized Matsuda diden't jump on the 'lets survay Light' band-wagon lol. Your story plays out like a game of chess, and I can't keep myself from asking 'who's going to make the next move?' On another note, it seems like all the steamy goodness happends in the bathroom as L pointed out. If L does indeed get his shot at 'bathroom time with Light' I will die laughing.
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Hosooie On: October 18, 2008 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read how u havent been getting any reviews n i most apologize. i love this story and i have read every chapter.but i am a lazy artist n havent taken the time to review. but as an artist i totlly know how u must feel...so here i am saying..I LOVE THIS STORY! Keep up da good work..n let them jump each others bones SOON!
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