| "Kagome and The Silver Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: Umm...
Reviewed By: Chizakura On: January 11, 2011 17:17 EST
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Just pointing out that there is a little awkward mistake in chap 18. Here's a fun fact: in Japan, white is actually the color of mourning that is worn when someone passes away. Just thought you might want to know. |
Title: P.S.
Reviewed By: AGB On: January 03, 2011 17:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
By the way, what she says is "I am the ruler of the realm of the night. I possess the power of darkness. I shall release your true form from the mirror." If you were going to have a copy of her it might have been better to pay more attention to detail. All I could think about in that scene was Kagome crashing through a portal with the real Kaguya who would kill him. But that's just me. Sorry! |
Reviewed By: AGB On: January 03, 2011 17:34 EST
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Ok...no offence but, DAMN U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KAGUYA IS MY FAVOURITE VILLAIN(Kagura doesn't count because of the circumstances of her death)!!!!!!!!!! U took her power! Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But other than that and a few grammar/spelling mistakes, looove the fic! :) |
Reviewed By: FIRE Tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2009 01:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome story i love how u took the characters and made them into a pirate theme. this is a wonderful story and u should keep writing. INUYASHA CONTINUES IN 2010!!!!!!
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Title: Kagome and the Silver Hanyou
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 00:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job,although,I think u should revise it a little,& add more detail.But other than that,great job!Catch ya later!
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Reviewed By: Kags_1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, glad you rewrote it I read the original one and really liked it but this one is even better loved that you finished it.
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: romancefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story from beginning to end! It was dramatic and romantic! I especially loved the ending! I hope you continue to write!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 06:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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that was great ^___^ loved it :D
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Reviewed By: loveofcandy On: September 12, 2008 19:41 EDT
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this is interesting... its kinda a remake of one story i forget the title exacally but his name was the silver hanyou as well some of teh same dialect i dont think it will be as good as that story though if you change the wording around a bit it might of made it better this was a good story though keep writing youll get better you have the tallent
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Title: YAy MIRO HAD TWINS AND KAGOME HAD A LITLE GIRL WHAT A GREAT ENDING I WISH U WOULD DO A SEQUEL OH WELL THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 14:36 EDT
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THANK U SOO MUCH
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 11:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
n'awww loved it :P but its sad, coz you killed poor Sesshy T_T
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 15:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was like the awesomest fanfic i ever read (next to my own of course, lol) thanks for sharing! and let me know if you ever plan to make a sequel!
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: September 05, 2008 10:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The whole story was amazing. You did a wonderful job. I am glad that Inuyasha and Kagome had a baby boy. Again, that was a great story.
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Title: AWSOME CHAPPY OH AND U ARE SO LUCKY SCHOOL STARTED FOR ME LIKE A FUCKIN WEEK AGO xp AWSOME STORY I LOVED THE ENDING i am a little disapointed it wasn't twins though.....sniffle
Reviewed By: shell6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 06:33 EDT
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^.^
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