| "Inu Hakusho" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Title: update with new chapter!!!
Reviewed By: vampitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2012 23:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please keep writing this!!!! i wanna read more!!! THANK YOU!!!! ~vampitty aka Sammy Leckie |
Reviewed By: Talia_Naeva [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 09:29 EDT
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Great story I really love it. One good rule of thumb is that every time someone different speaks. It`s a new paragraph.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 07:44 EDT
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thank you thank you thank you for the update! when does kagome and her family get to see her younger brother again for the first time in 10 years?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2009 02:29 EDT
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Glad to see more from you! I think my favorite part was Youko wishing Kurama could have been just a bit less graceful for just a second there. LOL! I hope you write more soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: jem89 On: April 19, 2009 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your stories (especially this one). One thing I will say is I think your chapters are kind of short. Other than that yoiur ideas for stories are really good. Please update soon : )
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 06:28 EST
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i love this story, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 05:50 EST
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i dont think i've reviewed for a while so let me say that this is a good story. i do think that kagome's reaction to kurama being her stepbrother was off, she hasnt seen her dad or brother in 10 years and this guy she just meet says he lives with them and all she says is ok? maybe she's in shock or hiding it, but i think she would be very hurt that her father and brother apparently prefer kurama to her. i wish the chapters were longer and i hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 23:36 EDT
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The word choice errors are really bad in this chapter, which is surprising since they haven't been that bad in previous chapters. I think the cats name is spelled as either Buyo, Bouyo, or Buyou. I think I've seen all 3 but the 1st is the most common spelling.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2008 23:24 EDT
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this is a great story, could you make the chapters longer and post more often?
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Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 18:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story. I also like how you tied Kagome and Shuuichi together like that. It's a petty awesome story. In the next chapter do they meet Inuyasha? I really can't wait until that happens! Update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH THIS WAS GREAT TO MORE PLEASE.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 00:17 EDT
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thank you for the cookie, you know i read that when i had cookies in the oven so i really get one. you said kagomes dad left for another woman, it doesnt have to be kurama's mom he could have left the first woman (or she left him or she died) before he met kurama's mom the question is why did he only take one kid and why didnt he or kagome's brother ever visit.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 23:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good ! I'm glad I was looking forward to it. MMM this cookie is great!
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Reviewed By: SacredHime On: September 14, 2008 15:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay update keep it up this story is turning out to be good. update again soo please.
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Reviewed By: yucku On: September 14, 2008 13:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this shit sucks.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 20:11 EDT
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so kagome has a dad and another brother both of whom she hasnt seen in years and are kurama's stepfather and stepbrother :) this is good, now is kurama & kagomes's family going to find out the truth about what's going on in their lives?
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 13:05 EDT
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this is a great story, please keep up the good work. i cant wait to find out how they realize that kagome is the girl they've been searching for
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Title: Good Story Begininng
Reviewed By: stebba_stud [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 22:26 EDT
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please update soon and I wouldn't mind Kagome, Hiei and Kurama to end up to gather also I hope that you'll have a little lime since it's T-Rated and so not suited to have a lemon (if you could make on at that since I don't know) but aside from that PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 04:31 EDT
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this is a good story so far. i dont mind all off the japanese words, but (or in addition to) could you have the translation in paranthese beside the word? it doesnt matter much when there's only one or two words in a chapter, but when there are several in every paragraph it gets hard to read come to an unfamiliar word, stop & scroll down to find out what it means, then have to do it again in a sentance or two.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 03:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this please update
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Reviewed By: touketsumizu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 01:44 EDT
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i forgot to tell you that he can talk telepathically (if thats a word) because of his jagan eye. And also, he can manipulate lower class youkai, and try to read somebody else's memories.
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Reviewed By: touketsumizu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! is this going to be hiei and kagome fanfic??? i hope it is. Hiei is half fire and a koorime (ice demon) so a hiyoukai. He had the jagan transplanted so he could become stronger, but the other fanfiction wrote something else like he got it so he could find yukina (he's twin sister) and to have revenge on the koorime clan (i'm not sure if it's fact or fiction). well, i hope that helps.
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