| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: May Auna On: March 10, 2009 07:19 CDT
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awsome story. oooooooo are the babies going to be twins that would be so awsome, one would look like sessh then the other like kagura
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty on laptop and not logged in.. On: March 06, 2009 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!!! I loved these lines!! "I can easily tell that you are tired. It's late. It's raining. It wouldn't be safe. End of discussion." Sesshomarou explained. `Looks like someone lost of his legendary self control' Sesshomarou's inner demon commented with glee. `I did no such thing' Sesshomarou retorted. `Of course jumping on Kagura after saying you wanted to be "just friends" absolutely does not fall in this category. Neither of course does forcing her to sleep in the same bed as you. I told you it would be too hard to keep away from her…' `Actually, you were right. This Sesshomarou always gets what I want. And I want the witch.' The dog demon thought smugly with a small sigh. `You mean you desire hermore than you have ever covetedanythingbefore…' His inner demon corrected. "Where are you running away to now?" Sesshomarou asked in a sigh as he sat up in his bed to look at Kagura. "I am not running away. I simply have to go… because I have to see Kagome." Kagura said as she quickly put on her flip flops a smile on her lips, proud that she had so easily found a quick excuse. "Rubbish. This Sesshomarou can once more see right through you. You are being dishonest just like yesterday" The dog demon said. "What the fuck are you talking about now?!" Kagura asked sending him a glare. "I don't care where you are. We need to meet right fucking now!" Kagura said at her two best friends. The three of them were having a call conference. The wind sorceress had so much to tell them, and it was to her dismay that she came home to an empty apartment. "No can do. Kaori just fell asleep. Byakuya and I were up all night. I'm so exhausted, and I intend to take a good long nap" Yura said with a yawn. "Inuyasha is cooking me breakfast. Actual food not instant ramen! I can't pass up this opportunity" Kagome said apologetically. "Just tell us what's wrong" she added. "What's wrong is that I kissed Sessh. Well he is the one who kissed me...anyway you know what I mean" Kagura said collapsing on her couch. She had not even bothered changing from her pajamas. "Oh and by the way Kags, I'm going to kill both you and Inuyasha for sure!"
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii On: March 06, 2009 10:27 CST
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Even though there was no lemon...it was still nice...poor Rin though...I hope she sees her soon XD thanks for the update though...made me wake up alittle more so I could read it XD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things were getting heated until kagura stopped it... now sesshoumaru is having second thoughts... while kagura is wanting some answers... wonder how things will go when they meet for the appointment and after that... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Soveriengty on old computer... On: February 27, 2009 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter!!! Very funny! not the biggest Cliff-hanger, but much bigger than the last one (then again a really big cliff-hanger involves some one dieing... lol...) how you are well and good luck with writing the next chapter (Falling asleep... forgot what I wanted to say... Thank god for Firefox spell check apparently my spelling goes down too...) I loved these lines... oh I think there was one little spelling opsie.... marked at the *** on either side oh and that dress would make Kugura... A big gigantic apple... "A girl is entitled to change her mind! Besides you admitted it was for the best to push back the date of your wedding. I mean come on who wants a maid of honor as big as a whale at their wedding? Not to mention that I was never going to agree to wear those apple green things you want Yura and me to wear, while I'm pregnant. And anyway it's not like Inuyasha is going to run away and change his mind because the wedding was pushed back for a few months…" Kagura answered trying to hide the letter she was actually writing to her employer. "Keh! As *** id *** I'd run away from a wench..." "How come I have to do this? I already went through the cake tasting and the flower arrangements. Couldn't your best man do some of this?" Kagura asked Inuyasha in a groan. Seeing the murderous glare Kagome sent her, Kagura added resigned to her fate "yeah yeah I know I'm to blame so I have to help. I'll be back. I'll go and get my laptop and send the letter to Abi in an email before turning myself in as your slave". "The Master is not seeing anyone at this hour. You would do well to remove yourself and…" Jaken started to be interrupted as he felt a gust of wind push him out of the way. "Thanks for letting me in." Kagura said mischievously as she stepped into the mansion.
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 01:47 CST
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wow sorry I haven't reviewed in forever! but like always amazing chapter. And I loved the end, and am so glad they are well sort of back together lets hope they stay that way :D keep up all that great work! :D
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so kagome & inuyasha's wedding got pushed back... about inuyasha's comment - did he do that on purpose or something?... but it did get a reaction from kagura though... will sesshoumaru and kagura finally be together yet?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 22:47 CST
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OMG so amazing as usual...and they better relieve some of that sexual tension or i will steal sessy and take care of it XD hehe thanks for update so soon...I was psyched when I saw the notice...cant wait for the next chapter though and hopefully they will admit to their feelings XP
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2009 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that sesshoumaru is being extra careful with kagura now that he knows she's pregnant with his baby - sweet... but what about their relationship - still unsure...will touga & izayoi be told about the baby too?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter!!! your chapters are a good length... another non-cliffy chapter... lol... great job!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2009 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They aren't together, but at least they are thinking about all of the things that happened while Kagura was away. And now that things are coming out they have a lot to think about. Just waiting to see how Sess's father will react. That should be funny.
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Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: February 17, 2009 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now why did you have to go and hurt my feelings, with breaking Kagura and Sesshoumaru up. Now that i'm sad i just don't know about reading this story anymore. Its hard to read it when they just talked things over and are making the break up more offficial. It sacres me because i really like Sess/Kagu to gether they just mix so well like cookies and milk. Love the story but hate the chapter. No hate is such a harsh word i'll just say i really, really, disliked the ending of this chapter. Sesshomaru better propose before the baby comes. The child will ask question when it gets older how come mommi and daddy don't like together. Not a good environment if you ask me. I will stay loyal to this story only because i'm praying that you'll do the right thing with getting the main characters back together. Much luv! P.S. Please make the next chapter long and lets get some where with it. because being left in the dark for too long keeps me up at night. and i have school and a life that is revolving a round this story with a headache and confussion.
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 07:29 CST
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Wow, now that he puts it that way it seems for the best that they are apart. Trust is majorly important. It's so hard to win back too.
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 14:42 CST
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That waitress is officially having the best day ever. Free priceless-gemstone necklace? Score! You know, I never considered that Sesshoumaru could have aunts or uncles. That does squelch my desire to neuter him. I'd say that everything from here on in will be much happier. Yay!
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Reviewed By: ezaangel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2009 08:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy yet so sad at the same time. I never been so conflicted. Great chapter... you definitely are an amazing writer.
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