| "Indecent proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 225 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 23:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fabulous chapter!!!! not much of a cliffy at the end but it still makes you wonder where they go from here... I think that the next chapter will be so hard to write...
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 23:42 CST
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nooooooooooooooo....make up dammit...gosh hey need to kiss and make up...oh well...it makes for good drama XD I cant wait for next weekend to come so i can read more...XP
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... looks like kagura & sesshoumaru's meeting wasn't quite a happy one... at least they forgave each other but sesshoumaru just wants to be friends with the mother of his child - and kagura was a bit disappointed?... seems like mixed emotions... but at least sesshoumaru now knows he's going to be a father and take responsibility... now if only they get back together... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like this chapter, but I understand why he said that. If you can't trust the person you're in a relationship with then you really have nothing. I just hope that between the two they really start a new relationship by starting out as friends. It's possible that they could really have a something if they are willing to work on being there for the baby and by some weird chance fall back into what they had before without all of the drama. For one they could learn from this experience and change if they fill that they are falling into that same pit as before.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 11:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome's wedding is coming close... and kagura is the maid of honor - is sesshoumaru the best man?... so for any rehearsals they'll see each other too?... so they saw each other again... since sesshoumaru will notice kagura pregnant will he smell that the baby is his?... will they finally talk?... is shiori related to sesshoumaru & inuyasha?... could this be the promise he was talking to his father about... what'll happen?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: Suspenseful
Reviewed By: Bre'Auna Kemp On: February 09, 2009 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man my heart was racing so fast i had to walk away from the computer great job
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 10:07 CST
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awww man...so close...your killing me here with all the cliffys...so you have to update sooooonnnnnnn...i personally loved the final line though cause i can just imagine him saying that and kagura with bug eyes...hehe...well i look forward to the next chapter and I hope its soon plleeaaaaassseeeee
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Reviewed By: inurinsama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 07:21 CST
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I think she's his cousin or something. If not, that explains why Sesshomaru didn't need Kagura to get pregnant anymore. When you said Shiori at first I thought you meant little Shiori in the anime, but grown up. Anyway can't wait for the confrontation.
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Reviewed By: ezaangel (nsi) On: February 09, 2009 04:16 CST
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awesome chapter.... wonder who shiori is :P cant wait for the confrontation...ill be waiting
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Reviewed By: ezaangel (nsi) On: February 09, 2009 04:15 CST
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awesome chapter.... wonder who shiori is :P cant wait for the confrontation...ill be waiting
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 01:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic chapter... I wonder who Shiori really is...
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 00:56 CST
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I am not happy. Not happy at all. This is what I get for having faith in you and Sesshoumaru. You know, we reviewers count on our authors to be merciful. And now Sesshoumaru has another baby mama. *growls at self* There's still an iddy bitty part of me that can summon up the will to hope Shiori is just Sesshou's cousin. Either way, I can't wait for Kagura to rip Sessh a new one! No, make that six new ones: one for everytime my neck spasmed because of something he did. .> I have a nervous tick brought on by agitation. Don't judge me. *slinks off into corner to await next chapter while sharpening her neutering tools*
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Reviewed By: Liesie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 18:16 CST
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Me like it. Me learn today that Russian no have forms of "to be" or articles. Me think it fun to talk like that. Me trying it. Me find that you enjoy suspense entirely too much for well-being of readers. Me want Kagura and Sesshy to reunite! Me cry until then.
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Reviewed By: ezaangel (nsi) On: February 04, 2009 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I freaking love this story...its 3.01 AM in Australia and I've been up since 10.00 PM reading it. I wasnt going to read it originally because I'm a Inu/Kag girl all the way but I decided to give your story a go and what a pleasant surprise. I absolutely love it. Keep up with the outstanding work and I cant wait to read the next chapter....Sess and Kagura rock forever lol...
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2009 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I read the last chapter and I didn't review... (ah I know why too fu
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