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| "We Love You Link!" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: loria On: January 16, 2018 17:12 PST
Comment/Review:
Nah, no Quill please. Vanilla's nice. get enough weird NTR and
sharing elsewhere.
| Title: good job and opinions
Reviewed By: wolf fang On: December 25, 2012 17:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey man nice job with this story its probably the best LOZ Lemon I read. I have finished reading chapter 4 already and I liked it and its getting better and better. Though I will like to give you my opinion on something’s, your authors note at the end of chapter 4 ask if Quill should be added to one of the lemon scenes as that ‘reward’ Link promised him. I personally think you should not add Quill to any of the lemon scenes for these reasons. 1) Link seems to be the type of guy that would protect his girls from other men and wouldn't share his girls with another man. 2) Link went through hell to save Hyrule from disaster he disserves to have Agitha, Zelda, and Midina all for himself. Maybe Link can reward Quill by giving him one or two SILVER rupee's since a signal Silver rupee is worth 200 green rupees and their very rare to find but Link should not reward Quill be letting him fuck his girls its wrong. Another thing I like to give my opinion about is whether Ashei and Ilia should be in the lemon scenes, I think it would work out since Ilia has a crush for Link and Ashei seems to like Link because he's a warrior like her. I really hope you will take in my opinion's and keep up the good work your doing. | Reviewed By: We Are Many On: July 24, 2012 07:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. Under the threat of being called a pervert, I'll review this. It's probably the best lemon from LOZ I've ever readed. Not only sex is greatly described, but also I don't feel disgusted by characters for acting like a perverts. Even after most kinky acts, I still find them lovable, and that's a big feat. Actually I'm happy with the flow of this story. Link saved Hyrule so many times, and in so many incarnations, that he trully deserve to have a kinky harem. I was actually "Fuck Yeah!" When girls agreed to get along and share, so everyone is happy XD. I greatly enjoyed this story and I hope to see more of it (Mabe even AU at the end, so Midna won't brreak the mirror :D) Good luck. | Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Mother_of_Forerunner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 23:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! you not only made lemons that was "nice" to read, ( yes, I am going to say: I am a pervert, and I am not afraid to admit it.) But you also made a well written plot/story that contained LITTLE TO NO FLUFF!!! I am impressed and can't wait for you to write and upload the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon Deux [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 15:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow I would have never thought Mida would do that, but in a way I guess i was waiting for it to happen. I'm glad you were able to give Midna a sex drive, and one of the cutest girls in the game Agitha.
| Title: god damn
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 12:44 PDT
Comment/Review:
wow this was a goodin plz second chapter
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