| "Affairs of the Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2012 18:13 PDT
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hey i just reread this fic and remembered how much i liked it. are you going to finish it?....i really hope you do ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sunnymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2009 10:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. Please update soon!!! It is really good.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 13:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story so far soo... Update Soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 18:30 PST
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oh my goodness, he needs to find a way out of that arrangement fast! im glad that it seems inutashio cares somewhat 4 inu. as always update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: thesims1231 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 00:32 PST
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Nooo!!! Inuyasha can't mate YURA!!! That's BS!!! :(
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Reviewed By: Bluesavorqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2008 18:19 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing. so how about that update
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 21:53 PST
Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2008 16:23 PDT
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wow...how can he possibly get out of the marriage. i thought that maybe his dad would care somewhat about his feelings but i guess no. well can't wait to see how its all gonna unfold when he sees kagome again. update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rach^_^ On: September 25, 2008 16:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It sounds really good right now. Can't wait tell there are more chapters.
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 14:42 PDT
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its gonna get interesting when she starts asking about his past. update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2008 07:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
interesting.
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Reviewed By: bbbelelana On: September 18, 2008 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey, the beginning is quite interesting. Are you going to write about both POVs? Id like to. see ya next week :)
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 09:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting setup and nice first chapter. You've got me hooked! I'm wondering how Kagome's going to find out about Yash. Does he tell her or does she find out accidentally? Can't wait to read more! I did notice a few very minor grammer/oversights such as: "some really restaurants pretty close by" Missing a word, probably "good" between really and restaurants. These in no way detracted from my enjoyment of the story. Hope to see more soon!
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 23:48 PDT
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these seems like it'll be really good. can't wait for the chapters to start ^_^
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2008 22:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I like fics that start off like these! Can't wait to read the rest... especially the un-tamed sex scenes ^_^ . J/K.
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