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Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2011 22:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! What a cliffhanger! D: I am, as always, thoroughly impressed by the level of detail, personality, and depth you manage to cram into your plots and characters. Simply wondrous writing, thank you so much for sharing it. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2011 17:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Past Lives so far. I also love Absence, Black and Red, and Red and Black. Please finish Red and Black as well. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2011 07:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 7 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author. This story is a Masterpeice in the making. Your first story Absence is also a Masterpeice. I read Past Live on fanfiction.net. I also reveiwed their as well. As The JamesS. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2011 07:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 6 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2011 07:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 5 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2011 07:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 4 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2011 07:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2011 07:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great. Jadeite will be surprise that their are more Sailor Senshi. Also the Sailor Moon, Sailor Mercury, and Sailor Mars have gotten stronger since his inprisonment. And that Sailor Moon's love intrest change fron Tuxedo Kamen to Sailor Mars. Sailor Moon and Mars all the way. I want another lemon scene between Usagi and Rei. I hope Rei will use what Ikuko told in Absence. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2011 07:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chaprer 1 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2011 07:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the prologue it was great. |
Reviewed By: LittleMica [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2010 15:22 EDT
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Hello Kirika, I do not know how long ago(but it was many years ago) I read Absence for the first time, but whenever it was, I thought then that it was the greatest piece of writing ever... it really made me cry, it was so emotionally charged and story so great... well, I still think that Absence is one of the best fanfics ever written(even if it has some errors :p). When you started this sequel I thought that there is no way you could come up with something even near as good, but after reading last chapter I started to think that perhaps you can :D. You are a really good writer... and so you know, I have been fan of your stories for many, many, years now and will be following your stories for, hopefuly, many more years to come. You are the greatest, Cheers!!! p.s. Ohh, and in case I fogot to mention it... I really loved how you portrayed Rei and Usagi in your latest chapter... but especially Red, she is my favoritue ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2010 18:33 EDT
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Your portrayal of Rei and her father's interactions is so heart-wrenchingly real. It's interesting how both Ami and Rei's personal lives are getting crazier, yet no one but their partners are aware. Things are about to get pretty interesting, I think. Bring on the drama and excitement! :D
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Title: Excellent, truely excellent
Reviewed By: Kieron [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2010 07:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya know, I never expected a sequel when you just about wrapped things up in Absence, only leaving Minako and Setsuna without a pairing. It's good to see you back and writing after the long break.(How many years was it?) IMOHP, Absence is a must read for anyone who calls themselves a Rei/Usagi fan, and I hope that this one semi-continues that tradition. (I know that you're focusing heavily on the Mina/Setsuna pairing, but still putting enough effort behind the Usagi/Rei pairing) It's good to see you in full writing style as well. When Absence started, your chapters were realitively short, when compared to the ones near the end of the story, and the ones in this part of the saga as well...and that's what I like to see. I absolutely hate it when someone writes a good summary, and their story sounds interesting, but when you go to the first few chapters, they're only 3-4ish pages long!!! It leaves the reader wanting more! You, however, do not only tell a good story, you write it like you're writing a novel, with each chapter being long enough to be interesting without being boring. Keep up the good work! I love your style, and I love this story! Kieron, signing out!
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Reviewed By: Silviata [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2010 10:24 EST
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Fantastic work, as always! :) I don't know what it is, but this story is just so... awesomely awesome. XD I love it!
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Title: Sweet!!
Reviewed By: Kuramo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is wonderful. I read Absence about 5 months ago and, and I absolutely loved it. I've been dying for this story to be updated. Anyways, just wanted to say thank you for all of your work so far. Until next time. ~Kuramo~
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