| "Free Me of My Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2011 15:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 7 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2011 14:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 6 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2011 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 5 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2011 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 4 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2011 14:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2011 13:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great. |
Reviewed By: master one [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2011 13:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great. |
Reviewed By: Ellie1867 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 19:25 EST
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Oh, and sorrty, style of writing wasn't supposed to be a one, lol, I just forgot to fill it in! I would have proabaly given it a seven or eight!
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Reviewed By: Ellie1867 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, these has turned into a real laugh, but is was also honest. The scene where she was thinking about ending it was real and honest. It gave a window into her feelings. However she doesn't wallow in her feelings. It was good to give her ways to improve herself, to help her get stronger. The twist with Chaos should be interesting. . . these last chapters were great. I lalso loved the story about Herro and his marriage to Relena. It was a rare insight inside his head, but still kept true to his character. Infact, that is one of the reasons why I really love this fanfic, the characters are true to themselves, and to their personalities. I will be looking forward to the next chapter. -Ellie
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 12:35 EDT
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REPLAY!! LOL! This is great! A wooden carseat! I think holding the baby would have been safer... The breast pump on Wufei's face would have been very funny to see outside of my brain!
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2008 12:52 EDT
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Well, I'm glad Darien got his karma served to him on a golden platter. It's also very funny that Heero would attatch himself to the baby Rini.
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 10:16 EDT
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I almost laughed when Heero wouldn't give the baby back. I always knew that guy was a softy. He's probably feeding and bathing the baby himself! You know, now that I think about it... Can Heero look a little bit like Darien if he straightened his hair out? Maybe the assassin will become the new father of Rini? I don't know, I'm making speculation here. Good story. Sorry I didn't review earlier. Life gets in the way sometimes.
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Reviewed By: FranceGamble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2008 00:33 EDT
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Well this might turn into something interesting. If you write it fast enough I think I'll be back for more. Too many stories get left behind on the web, though. So, please update real soon!
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Reviewed By: GoddessOfTheMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 01:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, this is a great story please continue. I so cant wait until the next chapters, i will be following this story to the very end
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Reviewed By: perfect little girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 18:24 EDT
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omg. this story is really great!! i cant wait to read the next chapter! PLEASE keep up with the story- don't let all this work goto waste! but really thanks for putting this story up.
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