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Reviewed By: jj On: October 30, 2008 19:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
to be fair, it's not all Naruto's fault he sucks right now. he was poorly treated and poorly trained, if at all, at the Acadamy. and from what we've seen, not at all by kakashi until sasgay wasn't around for him to train
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Title: OMG! This Is Amazing.
Reviewed By: -inufluffyfan- [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2008 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is SO rare to see such a talented literary work in Naruto fanfiction. Your writing is amazing and you really should have more reviews saying how great this story really is. I am amazed at how you portray Naruto and his dynamics as growing up from that lovable goof ball into a lovable hunky semi-goof ball. Please continue to update at this site and share the magic of great literature. Thank you and Please update soon : )
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Title: WOW AWESOME
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow man looks like you have outdone yourself this time this story rocks it kicks ass amazing another great story from you first Vandread ad now this can't wait for the next chapter. Also you hsould check my Naruto stories at fanfiction.net farewell.
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